June 12, 2021
My Lunch Today
After entertainment, we had lunch at a west restraunt. We sat in the middle of it and ordered some dishes. The starter had salad.The main course had chicken pizza, pasta, roasted mushroom rice and tomato soup. The deaserts were some icecreams. We decided to a west restraunt since the kids always like it.
My Lunch Today
After entertainmentsome activities, we had lunch at a wWestern restauraunt.
大写 "Western"。在这里，用 "Western"。"West" = 名词， "Western" = 形容词
西餐 = "Western food" / "Western cuisine"
In English, it's not natural to say "after entertainment". "After some activities" or "after a day of fun" is a little better.
We sat in the middle of ithe restaurant and ordered some dishes.
The starter hadwas salad.T For the main course, we had chicken pizza, pasta, roasted mushroom rice and tomato soup.
The deasserts were someas ice creams.
"Ice cream" is always two words! Also, "ice cream" cannot be plural, even if everyone has his or her own ice cream. You can just say "everyone had ice cream."
We decided to eat at a wWestern restauraunt since the kids always like it.
To be more specific, you could change it to "the kids always enjoy Western food" or "the kids always enjoy eating at this restaurant."
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Great job, the food does sound very Western, especially with pizza, pasta, and ice cream! It sounds like a good time!
June 14, 2021
I appreciate your correction. It helps me a lot. Have a good day.😀
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After entertainment, we had lunch at a west restraunt. After 大写 "Western"。在这里，用 "Western"。"West" = 名词， "Western" = 形容词 西餐 = "Western food" / "Western cuisine" In English, it's not natural to say "after entertainment". "After some activities" or "after a day of fun" is a little better. |
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We sat in the middle of it and ordered some dishes. We sat in the middle of |
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The starter had salad.The main course had chicken pizza, pasta, roasted mushroom rice and tomato soup. The starter |
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The deaserts were some icecreams. The de "Ice cream" is always two words! Also, "ice cream" cannot be plural, even if everyone has his or her own ice cream. You can just say "everyone had ice cream." |
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We decided to a west restraunt since the kids always like it. We decided to eat at a To be more specific, you could change it to "the kids always enjoy Western food" or "the kids always enjoy eating at this restaurant." |
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