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iI have been in America for 2 years. I can remember my first day here, i. I didn't speak any words in English, 2. Two years later my English is a little better but is not (perfect?) because iI don't have disciple is bine. Because my routine in America is really busy i, I have two jobs and iI have to training because I'm a professional boxing, ter. This process is really hard, it is too much but iI hope one day to speak fluently and clearly because iI would love to make new connections and meet people,. iI want to talk about my English routine, e. Every day I read around 15 minutes , and then iI enjoy to Llistening to podcasts in English, i. I work 10 hours and usually talk with my friend in English s. Sometime is I feel so nervous but i try it, when iI still try. After I arrive my home and before going to sleep iI write everything i doI did in my notebook, t. Today I started new routing and I'm going to be focus ion my pronunciation and my listening t. Thank you i Promes me ill, I promise I'll (one day) speak English fluently.

Very good! I can understand what you are saying, but made some corrections. See below for feedback.

1. Always start the first letter of every sentence with a capital letter.
2. It's generally best to use "two" instead of "2" when writing. Never start a sentence with "2" but with "Two".
3. Notice the difference between "to" and "too". For example, "I ate too much pie" vs "I want to eat some pie".

iI have been in America for 2 years. I can remember my first day here, i. I didn't speak any words in English,. 2 years later my English is a little better but is nonot good because iI don't have disciple iteachers because my routine in America is really busy i. I have two jobs and iI have to training because I'm a professional boxing, this proceser. This is really hard and is to much but iI hope to one day speak fluently and clearly because iI love to make new connections and meet people,. iI want talk about my English routine, e. Every day read around 15 minutes , and then iI enjoy to Lisening to podcasts in English, iI work 10 hours and usually talk with a friend in English s. Sometime is I feel so nervous but iI try it, wWhen iI arrive my home before toI sleep iI write everything iI do in my notebook, t. Today star new routing and I'm going toI'm starting a new routine. I will be focus ing on my pronunciation and my listening t. Thank you iI Promes me iise myself I'll speak English fluently.

The word "I" is always capitalised.
The first word of a sentence is always capitalized.
Sentences always end with a punctuation mark. A period(.) for most sentences.
A Question mark(?) for Questions.

I think you ment teacher instead of disciple.

Most words end with an s if you are talking about more than one.

Boy 👦🏼
Boys 👦🏼👦🏼👦🏼

Doctor👨🏼‍⚕️
Doctors👨🏼‍⚕️👨🏼‍⚕️👨🏼‍⚕️

But some words do not end with s when you are taking about more than one.

Person 👦🏼
People 👦🏼👩🏻‍🦰🧑🏿‍🦱

You just need to learn which don't use an s