I'm a student ofin high school and I get up at 6.30 a.m., so I will not tell everyonesay that my life is very perfect and that every day for me is an ideal day, but what is an ideal day for me and did iI have any such days in my life?

When I remember my unique events and days, I start crying and thinking that my life is awful and uncolorfulinteresting now.

People sometimes use colorful to mean "interesting and varied", but "uncolorful" is never used.

If we turn back to my birthday when I was 10., I guess ithat was a special day for me.

Firstly, my parents decided to make doubletwo surprises for me.

I am enjoyefond of beicycles and I had a little bike untill I became 10 years old girl, so m. My siblings and parents kept silent and said that we need to go to relatives who live in another city.

"So" doesn't make too much sense here as the cause and effect between the first and second clause is not very strong. In a sense the rest of this piece is because of your fondness for bicycles and the fact that you had a small bike, but this specific sentence isn't strongly linked to that fact.

I was sad and understood inat that moment that I will have very boring birthday with my relatives, and grandparents.

Commas are only used for lists of more than 2 items

However when we arrived I had seenaw a shop where there were a lot of bikes and my parents said that I canould choose one.

IOn that day I' d chosen the a big black, big bicycle and my siblings were in shock.

Adjective order is a really hard thing to explain as it's just something English speakers intuit and don't actually know is a rule, but black big bicycle sounds very unnatural, it's size then color.

Afterwards, I noticed that we were going to go to another place, and I wanted to predict what is it andt would be, but all my deductions were not so close to this placee answer.

Tenses are a little complicated as you're talking about something that is in the future from a perspective in the past.

When we arrived I saw the name of the place and it was the biggest and the most beautiful aquapark in the city.

When we came iI was very surprised a lot, because there were so many huge waterslides and pools.

By the way, the aquapark was my dreamsomething I dreamed about from early childhood, because I like water and my parents hadn't time to go with me there.

To say something was "your dream" implies it's your biggest wish or your goal. It's a very strong statement, and I think stronger than you meant here.

AI also I met my relatives and cousins, so I spent my time there with them and we haunged out a lot.

My aunt had baked a cake for me and it was so cute.

aAfter the aquapark we (hung out/seat) at aunt's home, ate cake and dreank very hot tea!

While "sat" might be correct as what you were literally doing, English speakers wouldn't describe it like this, they'd say hung out

It iwas my favourite day and I have never forgotten about it!

When I view photos from my 10-ths birthday, I smile and I can see plenty of memories from that day.

I hope that people in my life and yours will have your ideal days often and often.

In my opinion people who have good anda positive moosd every day, have a lot of energy and have many such ideal days like miney day!

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Is it 5 years ago? From your entry, I think it's 5 years ago.

I'm student ofin high school and I get up at 6.30 a.m., so I will not tell everyone that my life is very perfect and every day for me is an ideal day, but what is an ideal day for me and did iI have such day in my life?

I, I've, and I'm are always beginning in the capital letter.

When I remember my unique events and days, I start crying and thinking that my life is awful and uncolorfulboring now.

If we turngo back to my birthday when I was 10. I guess it was a special day for me.

Firstly, my parents decided to makprepare double surprises for me.

I am enjoyed oflove beicycles and I had a little bike untill I becamewas 10 years old girl, so my siblings and parents kept silent and said that we need to go tovisit our relatives who live in another city.

I was sad and understood inat that moment that I willould have a very boring birthday with my relatives, and grandparents.

However, when we arrived I had seensaw a shop where there were a lot of bikes and my parents said that I canould choose one.

You are to write in the past tense because it happened in the past.

In tThat day, I' d choosend the big black, big bicycle and my siblings were in shocked.

There's an order by which we write adjectives. I can't remember now, but check it out.

Afterwards, I noticed that we gowe went to another place and. I wanted to predict what is it andere we were going but all my deductions were not so close to this place.

When we came iI was very surprised a lot, because there were so many huge waterslides and pools.

By the way, the aquapark was my dream from early childhood, because I like water andbut my parents hadn't time to go with me there.

Also I met my relatives and cousins, so I spent my time there with them and we hanged out a lot.

My aunt baked a cake for me and it was so cute.

aAfter visiting the aquapark, we seat atwent to my aunt's home, ate cake and dreank very hot tea!

It iwas my favourite day and I have never forgotten about it!

When I view photos from 10-thmy 10-years birthday, I smile and I can see plenty of memories from that day.

I hope that the people in my life and you will have your ideal days often andvery often.

In my opinion, people who have good and positive moods every day, have a lot of energy and many such ideal days like mine day!

I'm student ofa high school student and I get up at 6.30 a.m., so I will not tell everyone that my life is very perfect and every day for me is an ideal day, but what is an ideal day for me and did ihave I ever haved such a day in my life?

If we turn back to my birthday when I was 10., I guess it was a special day for me.

Firstly, my parents decided to make double surprise for me.

I am enjoyed of beloved bicycles and I had a little bike untill I became 10 years old girl, sowas 10, so on my 10th birthday my siblings and parents kept silent and said that we needed to go to relatives who live in another city.

Makes it more clear that this happened on your 10th birthday.

I was sad and understood in that moment that I will have very boring birthday with my relatives, grandparents.

Can either say just relatives or just grandparents

However when we arrived I had seensaw a shop where there were a lot of bikes and my parents said that I can choose one.

IOn that day I' d chosen the black, bigig, black bicycle and my siblings were in shock.

Afterwards, I noticed that we were goingo to another place and I wanted to predict what is itt was and all my deductions were not so close to this placaccurate.

When we came i was very surprised a lot, because there were so many huge waterslides and pools.

By the way, the aquapark washad been my dream from early childhood, because I like water and my parents never hadn't time to go there with me there.

Also I met my relatives and cousins, so I spent my time there with them and we haunged out a lot.

after the aquapark we seat at my aunt's home, ate cake and dreank very hot tea!

When I view photos from my 10-ths birthday, I smile and I can see plenty of memories from that day.

I hope that people in my life and you will have your ideal days often and often.

In my opinion people who have good and positive moods every day, have a lot of energy and many such ideal days like miney day!