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alisa

April 3, 2021

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I write poems and want to write songs. So I learn to play guitar and try to practice every day. I hope that day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs.
I wanted to play guitar after I had been in a camp when I was a teenager. My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and first song and I began to practice. But I didn`t like that song really, so gave up the practice after a while. Then I began practice and gave up it some times during my life, but some years ago I decided that I must learn play guitar. I have breaks in my practice now too, but periods of excercises become longer and pauses shorter. And I see my progress, it`s so exciting!

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I write poems and want to write songs. So I"m learning to play the guitar and trying to practice every day. I hope that the day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs.
I've wanted to play guitar after I'd gone to a summer camp when I was a teenager. My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and my first song and I began to practice. But I didn't really like that song, so I gave up the practice after a while. Then I began to practice and gave up several times, but some years ago I decided that I must learn to play the guitar. I have breaks in my practice now too, but my practicing periods have become longer and the pauses shorter. And I see my progress, it's so exciting!

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I write poems and want to write songs.

So I'm learning to play the guitar and trying to practice every day.

I hope that the day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs.

"I will" is often said/written as "I'll".

I've wanted to play guitar after I had been in a'd gone to a summer camp when I was a teenager.

My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and my first song, and I began to practice.

But I didn`t't really like that song really, so I gave up the practice after a while.

Then I began to practice and gave up it some times during my lifeseveral times, but some years ago I decided that I must learn play the guitar.

I have breaks in my practice now too, but periods of excercisesmy practicing periods have become longer and the pauses shorter.

And I see my progress, and it`'s so exciting!

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

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alisa

April 4, 2021

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Thanks a lot!

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I write poems and want to write songs.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So I learn to play guitar and try to practice every day.


So I'm learning to play the guitar and trying to practice every day.

I hope that day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs.


I hope that the day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs.

"I will" is often said/written as "I'll".

I wanted to play guitar after I had been in a camp when I was a teenager.


I've wanted to play guitar after I had been in a'd gone to a summer camp when I was a teenager.

My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and first song and I began to practice.


My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and my first song, and I began to practice.

But I didn`t like that song really, so gave up the practice after a while.


But I didn`t't really like that song really, so I gave up the practice after a while.

Then I began practice and gave up it some times during my life, but some years ago I decided that I must learn play guitar.


Then I began to practice and gave up it some times during my lifeseveral times, but some years ago I decided that I must learn play the guitar.

I have breaks in my practice now too, but periods of excercises become longer and pauses shorter.


I have breaks in my practice now too, but periods of excercisesmy practicing periods have become longer and the pauses shorter.

And I see my progress, it`s so exciting!


And I see my progress, and it`'s so exciting!

Текст с поправками


I write poems and want to write songs.


So I"m learning to play the guitar and trying to practice every day.


I hope that the day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs.


I've wanted to play guitar after I'd gone to a summer camp when I was a teenager.


My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and my first song and I began to practice.


But I didn't really like that song, so I gave up the practice after a while.


Then I began to practice and gave up several times, but some years ago I decided that I must learn to play the guitar.


I have breaks in my practice now too, but my practicing periods have become longer and the pauses shorter.


And I see my progress, it's so exciting!


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