April 3, 2021
I write poems and want to write songs. So I learn to play guitar and try to practice every day. I hope that day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs.
I wanted to play guitar after I had been in a camp when I was a teenager. My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and first song and I began to practice. But I didn`t like that song really, so gave up the practice after a while. Then I began practice and gave up it some times during my life, but some years ago I decided that I must learn play guitar. I have breaks in my practice now too, but periods of excercises become longer and pauses shorter. And I see my progress, it`s so exciting!
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I write poems and want to write songs. So I"m learning to play the guitar and trying to practice every day. I hope that the day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs.
I've wanted to play guitar after I'd gone to a summer camp when I was a teenager. My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and my first song and I began to practice. But I didn't really like that song, so I gave up the practice after a while. Then I began to practice and gave up several times, but some years ago I decided that I must learn to play the guitar. I have breaks in my practice now too, but my practicing periods have become longer and the pauses shorter. And I see my progress, it's so exciting!
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I write poems and want to write songs.
So I'm learning to play the guitar and trying to practice every day.
I hope that the day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs.
"I will" is often said/written as "I'll".
I've wanted to play guitar after I had been in a'd gone to a summer camp when I was a teenager.
My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and my first song, and I began to practice.
But I didn`t't really like that song really, so I gave up the practice after a while.
Then I began to practice and gave up it some times during my lifeseveral times, but some years ago I decided that I must learn play the guitar.
I have breaks in my practice now too, but periods of excercisesmy practicing periods have become longer and the pauses shorter.
And I see my progress, and it`'s so exciting!
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I write poems and want to write songs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So I learn to play guitar and try to practice every day. So I'm learning to play the guitar and trying to practice every day. |
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I hope that day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs. I hope that the day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs. "I will" is often said/written as "I'll". |
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I wanted to play guitar after I had been in a camp when I was a teenager. I've wanted to play guitar after I |
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My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and first song and I began to practice. My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and my first song, and I began to practice. |
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But I didn`t like that song really, so gave up the practice after a while. But I didn |
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Then I began practice and gave up it some times during my life, but some years ago I decided that I must learn play guitar. Then I began to practice and gave up |
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I have breaks in my practice now too, but periods of excercises become longer and pauses shorter. I have breaks in my practice now too, but |
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And I see my progress, it`s so exciting! And I see my progress |
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I write poems and want to write songs. |
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So I"m learning to play the guitar and trying to practice every day. |
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I hope that the day will come when I will go up on stage and sing my songs. |
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I've wanted to play guitar after I'd gone to a summer camp when I was a teenager. |
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My parents bought a guitar for me, an acquaintance showed me three first chords and my first song and I began to practice. |
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But I didn't really like that song, so I gave up the practice after a while. |
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Then I began to practice and gave up several times, but some years ago I decided that I must learn to play the guitar. |
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I have breaks in my practice now too, but my practicing periods have become longer and the pauses shorter. |
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And I see my progress, it's so exciting! |
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