April 18, 2025
My history
my name is mary, I from Perú, I am studen architecture, I have 21 years old.
My history
"History" feels very factual. Like, for instance, "the history of the American Civil War".
mMy name is mMary,. I am from Perú,. I am studenying architecture,. I haveam 21 years old.
You could also use the adjective "Peruvian": "I am Peruvian".
"I am studying architecture" could also be "I am a student of architecture", if you had meant to use the noun "student" rather than the verb "study".
In English, we don't HAVE years when talking about how old we are. Instead, we ARE ___ years old.
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You could also use the conjunction "and" to connect some of these sentences. For example: "My name is Mary, and I am from Perú". Notice that there is a comma ( , ) instead of a period ( . ) between these two parts of the sentence.
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My history
mMy name is mMary, Iand I am from Perú,. I am studean architecture, I have student, and I am 21 years old.
Adding "and" allows you to connect 2 different thoughts!
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My hHistory
mMy name is mMary,. I'm from Perú,u. I am studean architecture, I have student. I am 21 years old.
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Great start. :)
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My history My This sentence has been marked as perfect! My "History" feels very factual. Like, for instance, "the history of the American Civil War". |
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my name is mary, I from Perú, I am studen architecture, I have 21 years old.
Adding "and" allows you to connect 2 different thoughts!
You could also use the adjective "Peruvian": "I am Peruvian". "I am studying architecture" could also be "I am a student of architecture", if you had meant to use the noun "student" rather than the verb "study". In English, we don't HAVE years when talking about how old we are. Instead, we ARE ___ years old. |
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