Oct. 27, 2025
My Heart Rate
I got back my medical report today.
My heart rate was usually 90 beats per minute.
My heart always beats very fast.
Before I went abroad, my heart rate was 108 beats per minute because I was so excited.
Despite a family history of hypertension, fortunately, I don't have it.
My kidneys, liver and other organs are normal.
今天我取回体检报告。
心率每分钟90次。
我的心脏一直都跳的很快。
当我出国之前，心率每分钟108次，因为我太兴奋了。
尽管有家族高血压史，但幸运的是我没有。
肾脏、肝脏和其他器官都是正常的。
My Heart Rate
I got back my medical report back today.
both are correct but this sounds more natural to me
My heart rate wais usually 90 beats per minute.
if you're speaking in the present tense
My heart always beats very fast.
BJust before I went abroad, my heart rate was 108 beats per minute because I was so excited.
a suggestion - using 'just' here shows your heart rate went up only for a short period of time leading up to going abroad if this is what you wish to say
Despite a family history of hypertension, fortunately, I don't have it.
My kidneys, liver and other organs are normal.
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My Heart Rate This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I got back my medical report today. I got both are correct but this sounds more natural to me |
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My heart rate was usually 90 beats per minute. My heart rate if you're speaking in the present tense |
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My heart always beats very fast. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before I went abroad, my heart rate was 108 beats per minute because I was so excited.
a suggestion - using 'just' here shows your heart rate went up only for a short period of time leading up to going abroad if this is what you wish to say |
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Despite a family history of hypertension, fortunately, I don't have it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My kidneys, liver and other organs are normal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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