Nov. 19, 2025
My greatest passion
There’s a quote by Zig Ziglar that has shaped the way I live my life: ‘You don’t have to be great to start, but you have to start to be great.’ It constantly reminds me to take action, even when things feel challenging, and it’s been a strong driving force behind my personal growth.
I’m originally from the Central Highlands of Vietnam, where I grew up amidst the tough but meaningful work of coffee farming. Life there can be demanding, but people always positive and supportive, which has influenced my values a lot.
Because of that background, I’ve developed a deep passion for sustainable technology. I genuinely hope to bring innovation back to my community, especially solutions that can help farmers increase productivity in an environmentally friendly way. That’s why I chose to study Technology and Innovation, and I’m committed to continuing my learning and research to create long-term impact for my hometown
There’s a quote by Zig Ziglar that has shaped the way I live my life: ‘"You don’t have to be great to start, but you have to start to be great".’
Direct quotations by somebody in English usually use ("). You use (') for a quotation within a quotation. Also the period goes on the outside because it is the end of the sentence.
I’m originally from the Central Highlands of Vietnam, where I grew up amidst the tough but meaningful work of coffee farming.
Life there can be demanding, but people are always positive and supportive, which has influenced my values a lot.
Need a verb (are) here to modify the noun (people), who ARE positive/supportive
That’s why I chose to study Ttechnology and Iinnovation, and I’m committed to continuing my learning and research to create long-term impacts for my hometown.
I don't know if you need to capitalize technology and innovation (unless it's a specific program). Otherwise as general fields of study you don't capitalize.
Impact should be plural, because you want to create multiple impacts.
I also added a period at the end of the sentence.
You can also say "impacts for my community".
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You sound very passionate about helping your community!
My greatest passion
There’s a quote by Zig Ziglar that has shaped the way I live my life: ‘You don’t have to be great to start, but you have to start to be great.’
It constantly reminds me to take action, even when things feel challenging, and it’s been a strong driving force behind my personal growth.
I’m originally from the Central Highlands of Vietnam, where I grew up amidst the tough but meaningful work of coffee farming.
Life there can be demanding, but people are always positive and supportive, which has influenced my values a lot.
Because of that background, I’ve developed a deep passion for sustainable technology.
I genuinely hope to bring innovation back to my community, especially solutions that can help farmers increase productivity in an environmentally friendly way.
That’s why I chose to study Technology and Innovation, and I’m committed to continuing my learning and research to create long-term impact for my hometown.
Technology and Innovation perhaps don't need to be capitalised in this context.
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Life there can be demanding, but people always manage to stay positive and supportive, which has influenced my values a lot. |
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Because of that background, I’ve developed a deep passion for sustainable technology. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I genuinely hope to bring innovation back to my community, especially solutions that can help farmers increase productivity in an environmentally friendly way. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That’s why I chose to study Technology and Innovation, and I’m committed to continuing my learning and research to create long-term impact for the people I grew up with. |
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There’s a quote by Zig Ziglar that has shaped the way I live my life: ‘You don’t have to be great to start, but you have to start to be great.’ This sentence has been marked as perfect! There’s a quote by Zig Ziglar that has shaped the way I live my life: Direct quotations by somebody in English usually use ("). You use (') for a quotation within a quotation. Also the period goes on the outside because it is the end of the sentence. |
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It constantly reminds me to take action, even when things feel challenging, and it’s been a strong driving force behind my personal growth. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I’m originally from the Central Highlands of Vietnam, where I grew up amidst the tough but meaningful work of coffee farming. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I’m originally from the Central Highlands of Vietnam, where I grew up amidst the tough but meaningful work of coffee farming. |
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Life there can be demanding, but people always positive and supportive, which has influenced my values a lot. Life there can be demanding, but people are always positive and supportive, which has influenced my values a lot. Life there can be demanding, but people are always positive and supportive, which has influenced my values a lot. Need a verb (are) here to modify the noun (people), who ARE positive/supportive |
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That’s why I chose to study Technology and Innovation, and I’m committed to continuing my learning and research to create long-term impact for my hometown That’s why I chose to study Technology and Innovation, and I’m committed to continuing my learning and research to create long-term impact for my hometown. Technology and Innovation perhaps don't need to be capitalised in this context. That’s why I chose to study I don't know if you need to capitalize technology and innovation (unless it's a specific program). Otherwise as general fields of study you don't capitalize. Impact should be plural, because you want to create multiple impacts. I also added a period at the end of the sentence. You can also say "impacts for my community". |
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