June 7, 2025
My football passion
I always liked watching football, especially while big tournaments, such as the World Cup or the Champions League. The thing which I like the most, is that the matches are full of emotions and often highly unpredictable. The score can change in the last minutes, what makes, that watching it is really exciting. I also like the fact that football can connect people. Even people, who aren't interested in it daily, often support, when their national team is playing. In the future, I would like to go on a stadium and see a match live, because I think, that it has to be a unique experience.
Zawsze lubiłem oglądać piłkę nożną, zwłaszcza podczas dużych turniejów, takich jak Mistrzostwa Świata czy Liga Mistrzów. Najbardziej podoba mi się to, że mecze są pełne emocji i często bardzo nieprzewidywalne. Wynik może zmienić się dosłownie w ostatnich minutach, co sprawia, że oglądanie jest naprawdę ekscytujące. Lubię też to, że piłka nożna potrafi łączyć ludzi. Nawet osoby, które na co dzień nie interesują się sportem, często kibicują, gdy gra ich reprezentacja. W przyszłości chciałbym pójść na stadion i zobaczyć mecz na żywo, bo myślę, że to musi być wyjątkowe doświadczenie.
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The score can change in the lastfinal minutes, whatich makes, that watching it is[them] really exciting.
I also like the fact that football can connect people.
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In the future, I would like to go ton a stadium and see a match live, because I think, that it has towill be a unique experience.
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Great job!
I love football (or soccer as we call it here in America). It's been my favorite sport since I was a child. I not only enjoyed watching the World Cup, but I also enjoyed playing it at school during recess. I agree, the tense, emotional matches where anything can happen until the final whistle blows is what makes the sport so entertaining. I remember the France vs Argentina match for the World Cup 2022 final being a thriller from beginning to end.
My football passionPassion for Soccer
I've always likenjoyed watching football, especially whileduring big tournaments, such as the World Cup or the Champions League.
The thing whichWhat I like the most, is that the matches are full of emotions and often highly unpredictable.
"Full of emotion" or "high emotions" or "highly emotional"
The score can change in the last minutes, whatich makes, that watching it is really exciting.
Alternatives to better capture your audience:
The score can drastically change at any moment, making the game exciting to watch.
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The score can change at any moment, leaving fans on the edge of their seat.
I also like the fact that football can connect people.
Even people, who aredon't interested infollow it daily, often support, when their national team is playing.
In the future, I would like to go ton a stadium and see a mwatch a live match, because I think, that it has towould be a unique experience.
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In the future, I would like to visit a stadium to watch a live game. I believe that would be a once-in-a-lifetime experience!
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I understand "football" is the appropriate translation from other languages. However, if your goal is to genuinely have Americans understand you, I recommend using Soccer instead of football. The beauty of English is that there are countless ways to write sentences that mean the same thing. It is not very rigid, although I believe less is more. You are doing very well. Keep going!
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Generally, all words in a title are capitalised.
I've always liked watching football, especially whileduring big tournaments, such as the World Cup or the Champions League.
"I've" is in what we call the past perfect tense. The past perfect is used when no particular past time frame is specified, such as in this sentence. Conversely, the simple past is used when a past time frame is specified, such as in the sentence "I liked watching football when I was 6 years old."
The thing which I like the most, is that the matches are full of emotions and often highly unpredictable.
(1) The placement of the comma is awkward and unnatural.
(2) Generally, "emotion" is an uncountable noun. It is countable when we are referring to different types of emotions (e.g. joy, anger, sorrow, etc.)
The score can change in the last few minutes, whatich makes, that watching it is really exciting.
Alternativley: "...in the final minutes".
I also like the fact that football can connect people.
Even people, who aren't interested in it dainormally, often support, when their national team when it is playing.
(1) The use of the commas here is very unnatural. There is a difference between "people who aren't interested in it", and "people, who aren't interested in it"; the former refers only to people who aren't interested in soccer, while the latter implies that people in general (i.e. everyone) don't like soccer.
(2) "Interested in it daily" doesn't really make sense. The word you're looking for is "normally".
(3) Here, when "support" is used in isolation, it's not clear what exactly the people are supporting. You should make it explicit by writing "support their national team".
In the future, I would like to go ton a stadium and see a match live, because I think, that it has towill be a unique experience.
(1) "Go on a stadium" means to literally climb onto the roof of a stadium!
(2) The comma breaks the flow of the sentence in an awkward and unnatural way.
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Overall, I noticed that you seem to be quite fond of using commas. However, do bear in mind that commas indicate a physical pause when reading. When used incorrectly, they can be extremely unnatural, and can even alter the meaning of a sentence. But I suppose the only way to know whether a comma is appropriate is through exposure. Just keep on writing, and we'll continue helping you!
I've always liked watching football, especially whileduring big tournaments, such as the World Cup or the Champions League.
"I've always liked" fits better when you also like watching football now I think.
The thing which I like the most, is that the matches are full of emotions and often highly unpredictable.
The score can change in the lastfinal minutes, whatich makes, that watching it is really exciting.
Even people, who aren't interested in it daily, often support, when their national team when it is playing.
"support" is more natural with a noun following it.
In the future, I would like to go ton a stadium and see a match live, because I think, that it has to be a unique experience.
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The thing which I like the most, is that the matches are full of emotions and often highly unpredictable. The thing which I like the most, is that the matches are full of emotion The thing which I like the most (1) The placement of the comma is awkward and unnatural. (2) Generally, "emotion" is an uncountable noun. It is countable when we are referring to different types of emotions (e.g. joy, anger, sorrow, etc.)
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