I am Roza, and I am from is Kazakhstan.

Two sentences need comma

Now iI don't know what to write here.

For that reason iI will write don't unimportant things.

I want to speak freely in English, because this language is very important for my future.

I think that today eEnglish ins the world the first language.number one language in the world.

I bought a courcse with my sister, in order to learn English.

Nuance - this place is emphasis on the course instead of placing emphasis on the buying. If you include “in order to” a place emphasis on buying more so than the course itself.

After theaking course , learning this language became interesting forto me and helped me improve my vocabulary a lot.

“-ing” transforms a verb into a noun

After finishing the course iI wanted to find a way improve my reading, writing, speaking and listening skills every day.

And I asked in chat gpt, and it recommended the website for improve my website.

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I am Roza and I am from is Kazakhstan.

Now iI don't know what to write here.

For that reason iI will write down't important things.

I want to speak freely in English,English fluently because this language very important for my future.

I think that today e, English ins the world the firs’s most important language.

I boughtenrolled in a courcese with my sister, in order to learn English.

After the course , learn this languageing English became interesting for me and helped me improve my vocabulary a lot.

After finishing the course iI wanted to find a way to improve my reading, writing, speaking and listening skills every day.

And I asked in cChat gpt and it recommended theis website forto improve my websiteskills.

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Capitalization rules when it comes to your title.

I am Roza and I am from is Kazakhstan.

No need to put "is"

Now iRight now, I don't know what to write here.

"I" should be capitalized because it is a proper noun.
"Right now" sounds more natural, and "I'm not sure what to write" is a clearer way of expressing uncertainty.

For that So I’ll just sharea son i will write don't important things.me random thoughts

This is more natural and conveys that you're not worried about writing something specific or important.

I want to speak freeluently in English, because this languageit is very important for my future.

"Fluently" is the correct term when talking about speaking a language well. "This language" was replaced with "it" for smoother flow.

I thinkbelieve that today e, English ins the world the first language.most widely spoken language in the world

This rephrasing is more precise and accurate. "Most widely spoken" is the correct way to describe the global use of English.

I bought a courcse with my sister, in order to learn English.

Fixed the spelling of "course," and the phrase "to learn English" sounds more natural than "in order to."

After the course , learning thise language became more interesting for me and helped me improve my vocabulary a lot.

Adjusted for better flow and readability. "Learning" is the correct form here.

After finishing the course i, I wanted to find a ways to improve my reading, writing, speaking, and listening skills every day.

Added a comma after "course" and changed "a way" to "ways" for consistency and clarity.

And I asked in chat gptChatGPT for advice, and it recommended thea website forto help improve my website.skills

Fixed capitalization and clarified the meaning of "website"

For that reason,That's why I am here.

This sounds more natural and conversational.

I am Roza and I am from is Kazakhstan.

Now iI don't know what to write here.

For thatis reason iI willon't write don'about important things.

I want to speak freely in English, because this language is very important for my future.

I think that today eEnglish ins the world the first languagemost used language in the world.

I bought a courcse with my sister, in order to learn English.

After completing the course , learn this languageing English became interesting for me and helped me improve my vocabulary a lot.

And I asked in chat gpt and it recommended theis website for improve my websitin order to improve.

For thatis reason, I am here.