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Jonas

June 12, 2021

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My first journal

This is my first journal here.I have learned English for more than 15 years. However I still think that my English is not even as good as some children’s.I found that I am not able to use this language well at work. So I decide to improve my English skills especially on oral and listening. I have been listening to a lot of radios in English and many ebooks.Furthermore,I started to have private lessons with foreign tutors these days. I am sure that I am getting better on my oral English and I feel more confident now. From now on,I will keep writing my journal to improve my writing skills.

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My fFirst jJournal

Nouns and verbs are typically capitalized in titles.

This is my first journal here. I have learned English for more than 15 years.

However, I still think that my English is not even as good as some children’s.I I have found that I am not able to use this language well at work.

So I decide to improve my English skills, especially on oralspeaking and listening.

I have been listening to the radio a lot ofand readiong ebooks in English and many ebooks. Furthermore,I I recently started to have private lessons with foreign tutors these days.

I am sure that I am getting better on my oralat speaking English and I feel more confident now.

From now on, I will keep writing my journal to improve my writing skills.

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Good luck on improving your writing!

So I decide to improve my English skills especially on oral and listening.


So I decide to improve my English skills, especially on oralspeaking and listening.

My first journal


My fFirst jJournal

Nouns and verbs are typically capitalized in titles.

This is my first journal here.I have learned English for more than 15 years.


This is my first journal here. I have learned English for more than 15 years.

However I still think that my English is not even as good as some children’s.I found that I am not able to use this language well at work.


However, I still think that my English is not even as good as some children’s.I I have found that I am not able to use this language well at work.

I have been listening to a lot of radios in English and many ebooks.Furthermore,I started to have private lessons with foreign tutors these days.


I have been listening to the radio a lot ofand readiong ebooks in English and many ebooks. Furthermore,I I recently started to have private lessons with foreign tutors these days.

I am sure that I am getting better on my oral English and I feel more confident now.


I am sure that I am getting better on my oralat speaking English and I feel more confident now.

From now on,I will keep writing my journal to improve my writing skills.


From now on, I will keep writing my journal to improve my writing skills.

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