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We capitalize the name of the months.

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"Veritable" is technically correct but that's a much more formal word for this casual essay. "Truly" is more natural.

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Thanks you.

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Thanks you.

My fFirst eExperience

Since nNovember, I've lived in Canada.

Here iIt is very cold then Ire, but I've discover aed hot chocolate.!

Hot chocolate is a veritabley delicious hot drink, and it is athe best way to reduce the cold.

I very likeliked it so much, that I buyought a botlex of hot chocolate to domix to make int my self at home.

I change it to "box" from "bottle", because most hot chocolate is made from a powdered mix or just cocoa. Neither come in a bottle.

Thanks you.