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June 3, 2025

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My first English Diary

i waked up 8am. i felt so tired because i went to bed late yesterday. i sipped the water and taked shower after i wake up. and eat webfoot octopus that is my favorite food. i dont know english name about it. and i went to the gym. the gym's located 600m at my house. i woked out arms. After i voted for president.


나는 8시에 일어났다. 나는 몹시 피곤했다. 왜냐하면 어제 늦게 잤기 때문이다. 다는 일어나서 물을 마시고 샤워를 했다. 그리고 내가 가장 좋아하는 음식은 쭈꾸미를 먹었다. 쭈꾸미가 영어로 뭔지 모르겠다. 밥을 먹고 나는 헬스장에갔다. 헬스장은 집에서 600미터 거리에 있다. 나는 팔 운동을 했다.

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iI waoked up at 8am.

iI sipped the water and takedook a shower after iI waoke up.

and eI also ate webfoot octopus thatwhich is my favorite food.

iI don't know ethe English name aboutfor it.

aAnd iI went to the gym.

tThe gym' is located 600m atfrom my house.

iI worked outn my arms.

After iI voted for the president.

My first English Diary

iI waoked up 8am.

iI felt so tired because iI went to bed late yesterday.

iI sipped thon some water and takedook a shower after iI waoke up.

and eI ate webfoot octopus that, which is my favorite food.

iI don't know the english name aboutfor it.

and iThen, I went to the gym.

tThe gym's located 600 m atfrom my house.

iI worked outn my arms.

After iwards, I voted forin the presidential election.

My first English Diary

i waked up 8am.

i felt so tired because i went to bed late yesterday.

i sipped the water and taked shower after i wake up.

and eat webfoot octopus that is my favorite food.

and i went to the gym.

My fFirst English Diary

iI waoked up 8amat 8 AM.

iI felt so tired because iI went to bed late yesterday.

iI sipped thsome water and takedook a shower after iI waoke up.

and eThen I ate webfoot octopus that, which is my favorite food.

iI don't know eits English name about it.

and iAfter that, I went to the gym.

tThe gym' is located 600m atfrom my house.

iI worked out my arms.

After iward, I voted for president.

My fFirst Diary Entry in English Diary

iI waoked up 8am.

iI felt so tired because iI went to bed late yesterday.

iAfter I woke up, I sipped thsome water and takedook a shower after i wake up.

and eThen I ate webfoot octopus thatwhich is my favorite food.

iI don't know ethe English name aboutword for it.

and iThen I went to the gym.

the gym'at is located 600m at metres from my house.

iI worked outn my arms.

You could also say, "I did an arm work-out."

After ithat, I voted for the next president.

i waoked up at 8am.

i felt so tired because i went to bed late yesterday.

i sipped the water and takedook shower immediately after i wake up.

and eate webfoot octopus thatwhich is my favorite food.

i dont know the english nameterm about it.

and next i went to the gym.

the gym' is located 600m at meter from my house.

i worked out my arms.

iI waoked up at 8am.

iI felt so tired because iI went to bed late yesterday.

i sipped the water and takedook a shower after iI waoke up.

and eate webfoot octopus that is my favorite food.

iI don't know english name about ithow it is called in English.

the gym's located 600m atfrom my house.

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i felt so tired because i went to bed late yesterday.


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and eat webfoot octopus that is my favorite food.


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i dont know english name about it.


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and i went to the gym.


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the gym's located 600m at my house.


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i woked out arms.


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After i voted for president.


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