I started to work on 23 April . I was nervious because I couldn't speak English and sometimes doidn't understand English .But I was nice to first day work.I metit. But my first day was nice, I met one of my colleagues and my chef.

My First Day of Work

I started to work on 23 April . I was nervious because I couldn't speak English and sometimes don't understand English .But I was nice to first day work., nor could I understand it. But overall, it was nice. I met my colleague and my chefboss.

My First Day of Work

I started to workmy job on 23 April .23rd, and I was nervious because I couldn't speak English very well and I sometimes don'’t understand English .But I was nice toit. But my first day work.as nice. I met my colleague and my chef.

1. Periods always come after the last letter of a sentence and have a space after that.
2. “23 April” is fine, but “April 23rd” is the way it is usually written.
3. On the 2nd sentence, it’s more natural to use the pronoun “it” when referring to English a second time to make it sound less repetitive.
4. “But I was nice to my first day of work” sounds like you’re saying you’re treating your first day of work kindly, “My first day of work was nice” would be correct.
5. All other changes I made were just to make the sentences sound more natural, you’re doing a really good job with English so far! :)

My First Day of Work

I started to work on 23 April . I was nervious because I couldn't speak English and sometimes don't understand English . But Iit was a nice to first day of work. I met my colleague and my chef.