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My first day in this app

I'm Brazilian woman, I wanna try my English. So a try speak about simple things in my day
I eat chicken, rice, potatoes, eggs, carrots.
Its só hard say in English kkk

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My first day ion this app

For app, use on instead of in

I'm a Brazilian woman, and I wanna trypractice my English.

Use "and" to connect the two parts of the sentence
Practice makes more sense than try here

So aI try to speak about simple things in my day.
I eat chicken, rice, potatoes, eggs, and carrots.

Try to [verb] instead of try [verb]
For a list, use the word "and" before the last thing

It's sóo hard sayto talk in English, kkk

"It's" comes from "it is," so use an apostrophe
The verb say needs to include what is being said after it, so talk is more general and better to use here

My first day in this app

I'm a Brazilian woman,. I wanna try my English.

In the first part, we need the indefinite article "a".

The second sentence is correct in spoken and informal English. In written English, we write "want to" instead of "wanna".

So aI try speak about simple things in my day .
I eat chicken, rice, potatoes, eggs, carrots.

Its sóo hard say in English kkk

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Welcome!

My first day ion this app

I'm Brazilian woman, I and wanna try myto learn English.

You could also say "I'm Brazilian woman and want to try to learn English."

So a, I try to speak about simple things in my day.
I eat chicken, rice, potatoes, eggs
, and carrots.

It's sóo hard say this in English kkk.

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Great work!

I'm Brazilian woman, and I wanna try my Englisht to practice my English, so I'm trying to write about simple things that happen during my day.

"wanna" is very casual and informal way of saying "want to". When you hear English speakers say "want to", especially in America, "wanna" is likely how it will sound.

So a try speak about simple things in my day ¶
Today, I eate chicken, rice, potatoes, eggs, and carrots.

It's sóo hard to say in English. kkk

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Welcome to the website! I hope you learn a lot :)

My fFirst dDay ion tThis aApp

I'm a Brazilian woman, and I wanna trypractice my English.

So aI'll try to speak about simple things infrom my day.
I eat chicken, rice, potatoes, eggs, and carrots.

It's sóo hard to say in English kkklol.

In English, you usually say "lol" not "kkk" when something is funny.

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Keep it up. =)

My first day ion this app

I'm a Brazilian woman, I wanna try my English.

So aI'll try to speak about simple things in my day.
I eat chicken, rice, potatoes, eggs, carrots.

It's sóo hard to say in English kkk

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Welcome to LangCorrect! This is a great start. :)

My first day in this app


My first day ion this app

My fFirst dDay ion tThis aApp

My first day ion this app

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My first day ion this app

For app, use on instead of in

I'm Brazilian woman, I wanna try my English.


I'm a Brazilian woman, I wanna try my English.

I'm a Brazilian woman, and I wanna trypractice my English.

I'm Brazilian woman, and I wanna try my Englisht to practice my English, so I'm trying to write about simple things that happen during my day.

"wanna" is very casual and informal way of saying "want to". When you hear English speakers say "want to", especially in America, "wanna" is likely how it will sound.

I'm Brazilian woman, I and wanna try myto learn English.

You could also say "I'm Brazilian woman and want to try to learn English."

I'm a Brazilian woman,. I wanna try my English.

In the first part, we need the indefinite article "a". The second sentence is correct in spoken and informal English. In written English, we write "want to" instead of "wanna".

I'm a Brazilian woman, and I wanna trypractice my English.

Use "and" to connect the two parts of the sentence Practice makes more sense than try here

So a try speak about simple things in my day I eat chicken, rice, potatoes, eggs, carrots.


So aI'll try to speak about simple things in my day.
I eat chicken, rice, potatoes, eggs, carrots.

So aI'll try to speak about simple things infrom my day.
I eat chicken, rice, potatoes, eggs, and carrots.

So a try speak about simple things in my day ¶
Today, I eate chicken, rice, potatoes, eggs, and carrots.

So a, I try to speak about simple things in my day.
I eat chicken, rice, potatoes, eggs
, and carrots.

So aI try speak about simple things in my day .
I eat chicken, rice, potatoes, eggs, carrots.

So aI try to speak about simple things in my day.
I eat chicken, rice, potatoes, eggs, and carrots.

Try to [verb] instead of try [verb] For a list, use the word "and" before the last thing

Its só hard say in English kkk


It's sóo hard to say in English kkk

It's sóo hard to say in English kkklol.

In English, you usually say "lol" not "kkk" when something is funny.

It's sóo hard to say in English. kkk

It's sóo hard say this in English kkk.

Its sóo hard say in English kkk

It's sóo hard sayto talk in English, kkk

"It's" comes from "it is," so use an apostrophe The verb say needs to include what is being said after it, so talk is more general and better to use here

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