Nov. 27, 2024
Today is my first fay after the sugery. I have differents feelings right now, for example I feel excited for return but I miss so much to my daughter.
I miss her voice saying me "Papá, papá me, Papá Mo". I miss all her antics, I think with the passing of days I will get used to it again. Only I need patience.
Beside, I miss to pick up my son Sebastian. In the end, the life is like that.
Now, I just wait to be the exit time for run to home and hug my childrens.
Thank you
My First Day After the Surgery
Today is my first fday after the surgery.
I have differents feelings right now, f. For example, I feel excited forto return home but I miss so much to my daughter so much.
I think this sounds better when you split the sentence.
I miss her voice saycalling me, saying "Papá, papá me, Papá Mo".
I miss all her antics,. I think that with the passing of days, I will get used to it/them again.
It = getting used to things again in a general sense
Them = specifically getting used to her antics again
Only II just need patience.
Besides, I miss to picking up my son, Sebastian.
"Beside" is used for locations. "Besides" is for talking about an additional point.
In the end, the life is like that.
Now, I'm just waiting to be the exit time forleave so (that) I can run to home and hug my childrens.
You can use "that" here, but the sentence is still correct without it.
Thank you
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Well done! I hope you can recover quickly!
My First Day After the Surgery
Today is my first fday after the surgery.
I have differents feelings right now, fnow. For example, I feel excited forto return but I miss so much tofrom it, but I also miss my daughter. a lot.
I miss her voice sayingcalling out to me, "Papá, papá me, Papá Mo".
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Instead of antics, you could also use the word "shenanigans".
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In the end, the life is like that.That's how my life is going right now.
Now, I just wait to be the exit time forhave to wait to run to home and hug my childrens.
Thank you.
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Good luck!!!
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I have differents feelings right now, for example I feel excited for return but I miss so much to my daughter. I have differents feelings I have different I think this sounds better when you split the sentence. |
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Only I need patience.
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Beside, I miss to pick up my son Sebastian.
Besides, I miss "Beside" is used for locations. "Besides" is for talking about an additional point. |
In the end, the life is like that.
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Now, I just wait to be the exit time for run to home and hug my childrens. Now, I just Now You can use "that" here, but the sentence is still correct without it. |
Thank you Thank you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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