My First Budget Plan ¶
After a semester in college, I gradually make sense ofcame to realise the importance of money management.

Not onlyjust for daily consumption, but also for my future plan,s, it’s time for me to analyse my cash flow and make a budget plan.

First, I should know the source of my money. Obviously, a major part of it is from my parents, about 2000RNB($300). In the near feature, iI will probably dowork a part time job, as for itsit is a considerable income, about $15, (I heard from one of my roommates who is a part-time tutor that it is about $15).

I'm kind of guessing as to what you intended for the second part of the sentence, as it became hard to follow.

Some other languages are less strict about this, but you need spaces after your periods in English. Also it helps this site break down sentences.

Secind, finding where I spend money is also important.E My expenditure includes food, ($150,), clothes and shoes, ($50,), books and stuff for studying, ($50.). That means there areis $60 left each month,which is very considerable.

As I mentioned above, after subtracting necessary items from my monthly income, there is some money left. How should I use it?Only Just put it in the bank? Make some investments? Find some ways to spend it? The way Iapproach I am used to is onlyjust putting it in the bank.

Because the money iI saved is not enough to make an investment (or the repayinterest is low), and I am not a big spendthrift,noer, as I don't wanting to waste money.

repayments are what you do on a loan, the money you get on investments is called interest for bank savings accounts, dividends for money paid by companies to shareholders, appreciation for shares etc. going up in value, etc. etc.

Spendthrift's meaning is correct, but it's _very_ old fashioned. More like something you'd read in a book from the 1800s than a word in common use.

Putting the money away safely might be a appropriate waychoice now, but what if the deposit exceeds $100,000 or even 1 million dollars after (I step into society (?) - Meaning unclear) in the future. Putting the money in the bank sounds a little bit silly. Or do I do like many Chinese people, and buy a house? I think I can’t answer the question now. Maybe I still need time to find out the secrets of the finance world.

How do you spend your depositmanage your finances after your bills are paid?

Deposit as a word is pretty strongly tied to bank deposits - this makes it a little weird to talk about spending it, if it's something you're spending, by definition it's not deposited. Usually in these corrections I try not to rewrite too heavily, but this sentence kind of needed it.

My First Budget Plan ¶
After a semester in college, I've gradually make sense ofstarted to understand the importance of money management.

- "My First Budget Plan" is repeated twice, so I removed the redundancy.
- Changed "I gradually make sense" to "I’ve gradually started to understand" to match the past tense of the first part
- The pronoun "I" should always be capitalized in English

Not only for daily consumption, but also for future plan,s, it’s time to analysze cash flow and make a budget plan.

- "Plans" is typically used in this context, as it refers to multiple future goals or ideas.
- In American English, "analyze" is used, while "analyse" is the British spelling. Since the rest of your text seems aligned with American English, I used "analyze."

First, I should know the source of my money. Obviously, a major part of it icomes from my parents, about 2000RNB($300). In the near feauture, iI will probably do a part -time job, as for its considerable income, about $15, heard from one of my roommates who is a part-time tutor.

- The phrase "comes from" is more natural here.
- "Feature" is a typo here, and the correct word is "future."
- The pronoun "I" should always be capitalized in English
- A hyphen should be added in "part time"
- Always put a space after punctuation marks

Seciond, finding where I spend money is also important. Expenditures includes food, ($150,), clothes and shoes, ($50,), books, and stuff for studying, ($50.). That mleans there are $60 leftves $60 each month, which is very considerquite reasonable.

- A simple typo in "Second"
- "Expenditure" is the singular form. Since you are listing different items you spend on, "expenditures" (plural) is the correct word
- I added proper spaces between the amounts and words for clarity: "food ($150)," "clothes and shoes ($50)," and "books and study materials ($50)"
- "Leaves" is more concise and natural than "means there are left." Also, I added a space in "each month."
- "Reasonable" works better here, as it sounds more natural when referring to leftover money. "Considerable" typically implies something large, which may not be the most fitting word for a leftover amount like $60.

As I mentioned above, after subtracting necessary itemexpenses from my monthly income, there is some money left. How should I use it?Only Should I just put it in the bank? Make some investments? Find some ways to spend it? The way I used to is onlymanage it was by just putting it in the bank.

- "Mention" should be in the past tense here since you are referring to something you've already stated.
- "Expenses" is a more appropriate word here when referring to things like food, clothes, and books.
- Rephrasing this as a question ("Should I just") makes it sound more natural.
- "Manage it" makes it clearer that you're referring to how you handle your money. "Was by" makes the sentence flow more naturally in the past tense.

Because tThe money iI've saved is not enough to make an investment or the repayturn is low, and I am not a spendthrift,no and don't wanting to waste money.

- "I" should always be capitalized. Using "I've saved" sounds more natural and indicates the money you have already saved up.
- "Return" refers to the money gained from an investment, which fits your sentence better.
- "Don't want to" is more concise and natural than "not wanting to." The sentence is also made more fluid by removing the second "not."

Putting the money safely might be an appropriate way now, but what if the deposit exceeds $100,000 or even $1 million dollars after I step intoafter I enter society in the future.? Putting the money in the bank sounds a little bit silly. Or, like many Chinese people, should I buy a house? I think I can’t answer theat question now.yet. Maybe I still need time to find out the secret of the finance world.

- "An" should be used before words starting with a vowel sound
- "Enter society" sounds more natural and formal in this context.
- added a question mark since you mentioned "what if"
- $1 million" is the preferred way to write it, and "dollars" is not necessary when the "$" symbol is already used.
- "Bank" was a typo
- Added "should I" to make the sentence a question that fits with the rest of the text.
- "Yet" is more fitting here to imply you're still figuring things out. "That" sounds better than "the" for this sentence.

How do you spend your depositsavings?

It's more appropriate to use "savings" rather than "deposit"

Seciond, finding where I spend money is also important. Expenditures includes food, $150, clothes and shoes, $50, and books and stuff for studying, $50. That means there areis $60 left each month, which is very considerable.

Note that I have inserted blank spaces before these words:
Expenditures
$150
clothes
shoes
$50
that
which
(The LangCorrect system has automatically highlighted the inserted spaces in light green.)

My First Budget Plan ¶
After a semester in college, I am gradually makeing sense of the importance of money management.

Not only for daily consumption, but also for future plan,long-term planning, it’s time to analyse cash flow and make a budget (plan).

I put (plan) in brackets because it's not necessary here.

First, I should know the source of my money. Obviously, a major part of it is from my parents, about 2000RNB($300). In the near feature, iI will probably doget a part time job,as for its considerable income, about $15,additional income. I heard from one of my roommates, who is a part-time tutor, that I could make about $15.

Seciond, finding out where I spend money is also important. Expenditures includes food,$150,: $150 for food, $50 for clothes and shoes, $50,and $50 for books and stuff for studying,$50. That means there areis $60 left each month,which is very considerable.

The error here was mostly punctuation and the order of words.

As I mentioned above, subtracting necessary items from my monthly income, there is some money left. How should I use it?Only Just put it in the bank? Make some investments? Find some ways to spend it? The way I used to is only puttingto just put it in the bank.

Don't forget spaces between sentences. It's very difficult to read without them.

Because tThe money iI saved is not enough to make an investment or the repayinterest (?) is low, and I am not a spendthrift, not wanting to waste money.

Putting the money safelyin a safe place might be a appropriate way for now, but what if the depositabout when the account balance exceeds $100,000 or even 1 million dollars after I've stepped into society in the future.? Putting the money in the bank sounds a little bit silly. Or like many Chinese people, should I buy a house?I I don't think I can’t answer the question now. Maybe I still need time to find outlearn the secrets of the finance world.

How do you spend your depositincome?