June 12, 2025
my feeling now
I wrote long long sentence.
Now.
I'm so angry.
What happened was I move study place.
It is core of issue
I'm always this place.
basically.
But today This place is so smell like sewage.
I've studied for 1 hour, so I decide to move another place.
Then move near cafe.
I wrote sentence to submit this site.
For 40 minutes.
I submit , then errrrrrror.
what happen?
And I had start over - because the wifi wasn't connected.
Today good day.
How I'my feeling now
I wrote a long long sentence.
Remember to use articles in front of nouns
Now.
I'm so angry.
What happened was that I moved study places.
Use the past tense if it already happened
It is core of issue
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I'm always this place.
But today Tthis place is so smellt like sewage.
Past tense
I've studied for 1 hour, so I decide to move to another place.
Include prepositions
Then I moved near a cafe.
I wrote sentence to submit this site.
For 40 minutes.
I submited it , then errrrrrror.
what happened?
And I had start overagain - because the wifi wasn't connected.
Start again is a more staddard way of saying start over
Today was a good day.
Feedback
Good effort! Just remember to use the past tense if it has already happened :)
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my feeling now How I'm |
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I wrote long long sentence. I wrote a long long sentence. Remember to use articles in front of nouns |
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Now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm so angry. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What happened was I move study place. What happened was that I moved study places. Use the past tense if it already happened |
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It is core of issue I'm always this place. It is core of issue |
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basically. |
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But today This place is so smell like sewage. But today Past tense |
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I've studied for 1 hour, so I decide to move another place. I Include prepositions |
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Then move near cafe. Then I moved near a cafe. |
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I wrote sentence to submit this site. I wrote sentence to submit this site. |
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For 40 minutes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I submit , then errrrrrror. I submited it , then errrrrrror. |
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what happen? what happened? |
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And I had start over - because the wifi wasn't connected. And I had start Start again is a more staddard way of saying start over |
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Today good day. Today was a good day. |
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