April 2, 2021
My favourite books
My favourite series of books is A Song Of Ice And Fire by George R. R. Martin. Based on which HBO created famous TV series and this was my reason to read them. As it turned out, at first I wasn't a big fan of fantasy genre. What changed my mind about the series was finding crazy theories on the Internet. I discovered that every small character has it's own story, and that the author likes to use a lot of irony and symbols.
After reading books I came back to TV series and I started watching it again. Even though first seasons were closer to books, I still felt like they changed too much. After last season some fans feel resentment towards the whole brand, but for me A Song Of Ice And Fire is still stunning series that I like to reread from time to time.
My favourite books
Based on which HBO created the famous TV series and this was my reason to read them.
You need an article like "a" or "the" to introduce the noun here.
As it turned out, at first I wasn't a big fan of the fantasy genre.
You need an article like "a" or "the" to introduce the adjective/noun pair here as well.
What changed my mind about the series was finding crazy theories on the Internet.
I discovered that every small character has it's own story, and that the author likes to use a lot of irony and symbols.
With an apostrophe, "it's" is short for "it is". For possessive use "its" without an apostrophe.
After reading the books I came back to the TV series and I started watching it again.
Even though the first seasons were closer to books, I still felt like they changed too much.
After last season some fans feel resentment towards the whole brand, but for me A Song Of Ice And Fire is still a stunning series that I like to reread from time to time.
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My favourite series of books is A Song Of Ice And Fire by George R. R. Martin. |
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Based on which HBO created famous TV series and this was my reason to read them. Based on which HBO created the famous TV series and this was my reason to read them. You need an article like "a" or "the" to introduce the noun here. |
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As it turned out, at first I wasn't a big fan of fantasy genre. As it turned out, at first I wasn't a big fan of the fantasy genre. You need an article like "a" or "the" to introduce the adjective/noun pair here as well. |
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What changed my mind about the series was finding crazy theories on the Internet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I discovered that every small character has it's own story, and that the author likes to use a lot of irony and symbols. I discovered that every small character has it With an apostrophe, "it's" is short for "it is". For possessive use "its" without an apostrophe. |
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After reading books I came back to TV series and I started watching it again. After reading the books I came back to the TV series and I started watching it again. |
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Even though first seasons were closer to books, I still felt like they changed too much. Even though the first seasons were closer to books, I still felt like they changed too much. |
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After last season some fans feel resentment towards the whole brand, but for me A Song Of Ice And Fire is still stunning series that I like to reread from time to time. After last season some fans feel resentment towards the whole brand, but for me A Song Of Ice And Fire is still a stunning series that I like to reread from time to time. |
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