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I really like to listening to music and playing it with my instrument.

'To listen to music' is also correct but the above is more natural.

I don't care about the genres of songs, but I only hearlisten to music that has no lyrics.

When we're talking about something like 'the genres of songs' we need to add 'about'.

'Hearing' is something which happens by chance, not something which we choose to do. Since you choose to listen to music, you have to use 'listen'.

Personally, I would write this sentence: 'I'll listen to any music that doesn't have lyrics'.

He is from Greece so heand has performed his concerts in front of the AcropoliParthenon, in Athens.

Using 'so' makes it sound as though every Greek musician always performs in front of the Acropolis.

Also, you say he performed 'his concert' this either implies that we're already talking about a specific concert (which we're not) or that he only performed one concert. I've changed it above based on my guess.

Also, being very picky, the Acropolis is the name of the area, and that the name of the building you mean to talk about is the Parthenon.

I was blown away by his live concerts and I have become hisa big fan.

Same point about 'his concert' as before.

'His big fan' weakly implies that you're his only fan. Regardless, it's not natural.

"'Beethoven symphony No.

"" Are speech marks and should only be used for something you're quoting.

7"' is the another favorite piece of music that I knew this song fromheard in a Japanese drama.

Saying 'the other' implies that this is the only other. I guess it's not so 'another' is correct.

When we talk about classical music we use the word 'piece'.

'Knowing' is a state of being, not something that happens in a moment in modern English. So: 'I know how to spell his name, I saw it on the register.'

When I was young, I just knew his symphonyies No.3, No.5, No.6 and No.9.

Because of they appeared in dramas, these symphony wasies were popular in Korea and I impress. I liked the verym the first time I heard them.

I'm not quite sure what you mean by 'I impressed the very first time' so I've taken a guess.

I played the symphony as a first Oboist in my amature orchestraThe amateur orchestra, in which I play the oboe, has performed these symphonies.

Oboe isn't a proper noun, so it shouldn't be capitalised.

The last song is "La cCaliffa" that is an OST in the same name movie and mad, which was composed for the soundtrack of the movie by the same name by Ennio Morricone.

I'm familiar with the term 'OST' but I don't think it's a well-known term for English speakers.

This is one of the most impressive songs played by Oon an oboe.

'Played by' implies the oboe is playing itself.

This is stated as a fact, which is okay if most classical musicians / Oboists agree on it. If

With this song, I decided to learn the instrument and I haveoboe because of this song. I practiced it every day.

Again, I'm having to guess your meaning a little here.

Here is the end of the songs.

I don't think this statement is necessary, it feels a little awkward.

If it is possible to play a song by myself, I like the songit even more because I can feel the its 'heartbeat of the song'.

'by myself' means on your own (혼자).

I've never heard someone talk about the 'heartbeat' of a song but it doesn't feel wrong so I've just put it in inverted commas ('') to indicate that it's your original thought.

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My fFavorite sSongs

I don't care about the genres of songs, but I only hearlisten to music that has no lyrics.

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He is from Greece, so he performed his concert in front of the Acropolis.

I was blown away by his live concert and I have become hisa big fan of his.

This is a tricky phrase, don't worry.

7" is themy other favorite music that, and I knew this song from a Japanese drama.

When I was young, I justonly knew his symphony No.3, No.5, No.6 and No.9.

"Just" is a very versatile word in English and can be confusing. Here "only" helps make it clearer and more formal.

Because of the drama, the symphony was popular in Korea and I impressed the very first time.

What do you want to say at the end of this sentence? I suggest maybe something like:

"Because of the drama, the symphony was popular in Korea, and that is how I was impressed by this music for the very first time."

But it depends on exactly what you want to say.

I played the symphony as a first Oboist in my amateure orchestra.

The last song is "La cCaliffa," thatwhich is an OST in the same name movie and madmovie of the same name by Ennio Morricone.

Here the grammar is correct, but it leaves it unclear if Ennio Morricone wrote the music, the movie, or both. Just a heads up! It's up to you what do to.

Here is the end of the songs.

What would you like to say here? Are you giving a general conclusion of your introduction to your favorite songs? If so, I recommend:

"With that, I have introduced all of my favorite songs."

It could take countless forms, though.

I recommend to learning any kind of instrument forin order to enjoying your favorite songs.