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llimas

March 13, 2025

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My favorite food

My favorite food changes from time to time.
Actually my favorite food is lamen, the Japanese food.
Noodles, fried chicken or pork roast, boiled eggs and pepper.
Before that, my favorite food was Shawarma, Middle Eastern dish. Very good as well.
Sadly here where I live is not so common to find these dishes, so sometimes I buy the necessary groceries and prepare them at house by myself.

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ActualCurrently my favorite food is lramen, the Japanese food.

Actually is valid grammatically, but I think "currently" works better because you're about to compare it to the past.

Before that, my favorite food was Shawarma, a Middle Eastern dish.

VIt is very good as well.

Sadly here where I live it is not so common to find these dishes, so sometimes I buy the necessary groceries and prepare them at (my/the) house by myself.

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Where I live you can usually find both. Most dedicated japanese restaurants here are sushi restaurants, but usually "asian fusion" restaurants will have ramen as an option. Similarly, some turkish restaurants will do Shawarma. They might be less than authentic since they're usually restaurants that focus on a big menu rather than specialties though.

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llimas

March 24, 2025

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Thank you :)

Actually, my favorite food is lramen, the Japanese fnoodles.

NIt has noodles, fried chicken or pork roast, boiled eggs, and pepper.

Before that, my favorite food was Sshawarma, a Middle Eastern dish.

Very goodIt is very tasty as well.

Avoid “good” in formal writing

Sadly, here where I live it is not so common to find these dishes, so sometimes I buy the necessary groceries and prepare them at housme by myself.

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llimas

March 24, 2025

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Thank you :)

Actually, my favorite food is lramen, thea Japanese fooddish.

Comma
The correct spelling for the Japanese dish is "ramen"
"Ramen" is one specific Japanese dish, so "a Japanese dish" sounds more natural.
Also, "the" isn’t necessary here.

NIt includes noodles, fried chicken or pork roast, boiled eggs, and pepper.

I added "It includes" to clarify the ingredients of ramen and made the list more structured with commas.

Before that, my favorite food was Shawarma, a Middle Eastern dish.

I added "a" before "Middle Eastern dish" for grammatical correctness.

VIt's very good as well.

I added "It's" to make the sentence complete.

Sadly here, where I live, it is not so common to find these dishes, so sometimes I buy the necessary groceries and prepare them at housme by myself.

The word order was adjusted to sound more natural in English.
The more common expression is "at home," not "at house."

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Good writing, keep it up! I also have a lot of favorite foods, it just depends on which one I crave for that day haha!

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llimas

March 14, 2025

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Thank you so much! :)

My fFavorite fFood

My favorite food changes from time to time.

ActualCurrently, my favorite food is lramen, the Japanese fooddish.

NIt consists of noodles, fried chicken or pork roast,roasted pork, hard boiled eggs, and pepper.

Before that, my favorite food was Sshawarma, a Middle Eastern dish.

VIt's very good as well.

Sadly, here where I live is not so common to find these dishes, these dishes aren't so common, so sometimes I buy the necessary grocerieingredients and prepare them at house byme myself.

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Great job. I love ramen too. I think you just made me hungry. :P

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llimas

March 14, 2025

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Thank you so much! :)

My favorite food

My favorite food changes from time to time.

ActuallyNowadays, my favorite food is lamen, the Japanese food.

Actually does not mean the same in English. You can replace it with At this time, Nowadays...

NIt's made of noodles, fried chicken or pork roast, boiled eggs and pepper.

This was not a complete sentence, so I added a verb at the beginning.

Before that, my favorite food was Shawarma, which is a Middle Eastern dish.

VIt's very good/tasty as well.

Again you are missing a verb.

Sadly here where I live is not so common, is not easy to find these dishes where I live, so sometimes I buy the necessary groceries and prepare them at housme by myself.

It would be more natural in English to say "I cook them at home by myself" rather than "I prepare them"

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Very nice post - it's making my mouth water! (If you don't know this expression, it means that you make me want to eat the foods you have described!)

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llimas

March 14, 2025

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Thank you so much! :)

My favorite food


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My fFavorite fFood

My favorite food changes from time to time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Actually my favorite food is lamen, the Japanese food.


ActuallyNowadays, my favorite food is lamen, the Japanese food.

Actually does not mean the same in English. You can replace it with At this time, Nowadays...

ActualCurrently, my favorite food is lramen, the Japanese fooddish.

Actually, my favorite food is lramen, thea Japanese fooddish.

Comma The correct spelling for the Japanese dish is "ramen" "Ramen" is one specific Japanese dish, so "a Japanese dish" sounds more natural. Also, "the" isn’t necessary here.

Actually, my favorite food is lramen, the Japanese fnoodles.

ActualCurrently my favorite food is lramen, the Japanese food.

Actually is valid grammatically, but I think "currently" works better because you're about to compare it to the past.

Noodles, fried chicken or pork roast, boiled eggs and pepper.


NIt's made of noodles, fried chicken or pork roast, boiled eggs and pepper.

This was not a complete sentence, so I added a verb at the beginning.

NIt consists of noodles, fried chicken or pork roast,roasted pork, hard boiled eggs, and pepper.

NIt includes noodles, fried chicken or pork roast, boiled eggs, and pepper.

I added "It includes" to clarify the ingredients of ramen and made the list more structured with commas.

NIt has noodles, fried chicken or pork roast, boiled eggs, and pepper.

Before that, my favorite food was Shawarma, Middle Eastern dish.


Before that, my favorite food was Shawarma, which is a Middle Eastern dish.

Before that, my favorite food was Sshawarma, a Middle Eastern dish.

Before that, my favorite food was Shawarma, a Middle Eastern dish.

I added "a" before "Middle Eastern dish" for grammatical correctness.

Before that, my favorite food was Sshawarma, a Middle Eastern dish.

Before that, my favorite food was Shawarma, a Middle Eastern dish.

Very good as well.


VIt's very good/tasty as well.

Again you are missing a verb.

VIt's very good as well.

VIt's very good as well.

I added "It's" to make the sentence complete.

Very goodIt is very tasty as well.

Avoid “good” in formal writing

VIt is very good as well.

Sadly here where I live is not so common to find these dishes, so sometimes I buy the necessary groceries and prepare them at house by myself.


Sadly here where I live is not so common, is not easy to find these dishes where I live, so sometimes I buy the necessary groceries and prepare them at housme by myself.

It would be more natural in English to say "I cook them at home by myself" rather than "I prepare them"

Sadly, here where I live is not so common to find these dishes, these dishes aren't so common, so sometimes I buy the necessary grocerieingredients and prepare them at house byme myself.

Sadly here, where I live, it is not so common to find these dishes, so sometimes I buy the necessary groceries and prepare them at housme by myself.

The word order was adjusted to sound more natural in English. The more common expression is "at home," not "at house."

Sadly, here where I live it is not so common to find these dishes, so sometimes I buy the necessary groceries and prepare them at housme by myself.

Sadly here where I live it is not so common to find these dishes, so sometimes I buy the necessary groceries and prepare them at (my/the) house by myself.

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