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May 12, 2021

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MY FAVORITE DRINKS.

This weekend I made some PDFs from my library.
How did you make them?
It is a long story, I think I'll talk about them next time.

Ok, today's topic.
Let me talk about my three favorite drinks.

First one is sport drinks. Made especially for good health.
I always make this myself.
Recipe is fairly simple.

First of all, You put a little sugar and a little salt in the glass.
Prepare little water that is boiled by the electric kettle in order to dissolve them.
And you pour cold water in it.
Finally, you squeeze lemon to make lemon drops.

It is called a hypotonic drink that makes you water easily.
makes you absorb water easier since it was made in the same condition as your body.

Second one is coffee.
I know, coffee causes diuresis, so it exudes water from your body.
I like it anyway, though.I tried to make one especially professional do it every time.
For example, latte art is very hard to make.

Third one is smoothies.
Cutting fruits and putting them and blending them.
It sounds simple, but it is also hard work.

I do not like cutting fruit because it takes me an hour or more.

Therefore, it is a little bit difficult to make.

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MYy FAVORITE DRINKS.avorite Drinks

Titles should be capitalized (only the first letters, though!). The only punctuation that would usually show up are exclamation points (!) or question marks (?).

It is a long story, I think I'll talk about themat next time.

I assume you are referring to the long story when you say "them," which is singular.

Ok, today's topic.

Let me talk about my three favorite drinks.

FThe first one is sport drinks.

MThese are made especially for good health.

I always make this myself.

RThe recipe is fairly simple.

First of all, Yyou put a little sugar and a little salt in the glass.

You don't need to repeat "a little" if it applies to both of the nouns.

Prepare little water that is boiled byBoil the water in the electric kettle in order to dissolve them salt and sugar.

AndNext, you pour cold water in it.

It is called a hypotonic drink that makes you water, which means it makes you absorb water more easily.

I suggest combining this sentence with part of the one after it, and splitting the second sentence.

makes you absorb water easier sincThis is because it was made in the same conditions as in your body.

Sorry, I don't know anything about hypotonic drinks, but this is what I assume you are saying.

SA second ofavorite drink of mine is coffee.

I know, coffee causes diuresis, so it exudes water from your bodymakes you dehydrated.

What you wrote is grammatically correct, but would sound very strange and technical. "Dehydrated" is usually used to describe losing water.

I like it anyway, though. I tried to make one especially professional do it every time.

I am not sure what you mean in your second sentence. Are you saying that you try to make coffee as good as a professional would?

For example, latte art is very hard to make.

TA third one isfavorite drink of mine are smoothies.

Cutting fruits and putting themMaking smoothies involves cutting fruits and and blending them together.

It sounds simple, but it is also hard work.

I do not like cutting fruit because it takes me an hour or more.

Therefore, it is a little bit difficult to make.

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It is hard work! I made a smoothie today too. Blueberries and bananas are easy, though.

And you pour cold water in it.


AndNext, you pour cold water in it.

MY FAVORITE DRINKS.


MYy FAVORITE DRINKS.avorite Drinks

Titles should be capitalized (only the first letters, though!). The only punctuation that would usually show up are exclamation points (!) or question marks (?).

This weekend I made some PDFs from my library.


How did you make them?


It is a long story, I think I'll talk about them next time.


It is a long story, I think I'll talk about themat next time.

I assume you are referring to the long story when you say "them," which is singular.

Ok, today's topic.


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Let me talk about my three favorite drinks.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

First one is sport drinks.


FThe first one is sport drinks.

Made especially for good health.


MThese are made especially for good health.

I always make this myself.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Recipe is fairly simple.


RThe recipe is fairly simple.

First of all, You put a little sugar and a little salt in the glass.


First of all, Yyou put a little sugar and a little salt in the glass.

You don't need to repeat "a little" if it applies to both of the nouns.

Prepare little water that is boiled by the electric kettle in order to dissolve them.


Prepare little water that is boiled byBoil the water in the electric kettle in order to dissolve them salt and sugar.

Finally, you squeeze lemon to make lemon drops.


It is called a hypotonic drink that makes you water easily.


It is called a hypotonic drink that makes you water, which means it makes you absorb water more easily.

I suggest combining this sentence with part of the one after it, and splitting the second sentence.

makes you absorb water easier since it was made in the same condition as your body.


makes you absorb water easier sincThis is because it was made in the same conditions as in your body.

Sorry, I don't know anything about hypotonic drinks, but this is what I assume you are saying.

Second one is coffee.


SA second ofavorite drink of mine is coffee.

I know, coffee causes diuresis, so it exudes water from your body.


I know, coffee causes diuresis, so it exudes water from your bodymakes you dehydrated.

What you wrote is grammatically correct, but would sound very strange and technical. "Dehydrated" is usually used to describe losing water.

I like it anyway, though.I tried to make one especially professional do it every time.


I like it anyway, though. I tried to make one especially professional do it every time.

I am not sure what you mean in your second sentence. Are you saying that you try to make coffee as good as a professional would?

For example, latte art is very hard to make.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Third one is smoothies.


TA third one isfavorite drink of mine are smoothies.

Cutting fruits and putting them and blending them.


Cutting fruits and putting themMaking smoothies involves cutting fruits and and blending them together.

It sounds simple, but it is also hard work.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I do not like cutting fruit because it takes me an hour or more.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Therefore, it is a little bit difficult to make.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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