July 31, 2021
My Family's Old Shop
When I was young, my house was nearby our family's store.
The shop sold clothes, blankets, fabrics, silks and so on.
My grand family and my mother always were there and operating the store.
My brother and I used to play the store, jumping between goods, trying to open and close the shop window and helping to calculate money.
When out-of-business sales, my grandfather seemed sad.
Now that I think about it, the shop was his everything and many memories were there.
Getting older, I can understand him better.
My Family's Old Shop
When I was young, my house was nearby our family's store.
The shop sold clothes, blankets, fabrics, silks and so on.
My grand familyparents and my mother always were there and operating the store.
My brother and I used to play in the store, jumping between goods, trying to open and close the shop window and helping to calculate money.
When it went out- of- business sales, my grandfather seemed sad.
I'm not sure if you meant 'when it went out of business' or if you meant 'when there were no more sales to be made'
Now that I think about it, the shop was his everything and many memories were made there.
Getting older, I can understand him better.
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The store sounds like it was a really nice experience (:
Aug. 1, 2021
Thank you very much!
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When I was young, my house was nearby our family's store. When I was young, my house was near |
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The shop sold clothes, blankets, fabrics, silks and so on. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My grand family and my mother always were there and operating the store. My grand |
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My brother and I used to play the store, jumping between goods, trying to open and close the shop window and helping to calculate money. My brother and I used to play in the store, jumping between goods, trying to open and close the shop window and helping to calculate money. |
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When out-of-business sales, my grandfather seemed sad. When it went out I'm not sure if you meant 'when it went out of business' or if you meant 'when there were no more sales to be made' |
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Now that I think about it, the shop was his everything and many memories were there. Now that I think about it, the shop was his everything and many memories were made there. |
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Getting older, I can understand him better. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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