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joselysv

April 5, 2021

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Tell us about your family. Are you single or married? Do you have kids or pets? Brothers and sisters? Intermediate to advanced learners: Continue on to describe someone in your family, could be what they look like or their personality. Maybe things you have in common with them or differences you have had.
My family

In my family we are a lot of people, my family is very big, I have a lot of cousin from my mom's family. In my first family we are six people, my mother, my father, my two brothers, my sister and I.

So I have three brothers, two older than me and one younger, the younger hast sixteen years old and the older hast twenty-nine, we live in a house in a centric zone, we have managed to have a great relationship between all of us, despites our differences and our character.

My family is very important to me, I really care for them, specially my mom, she has sixty years old, and my father has sixtytwo and because all this Covid things, we take more prevention when we go outside because they can get sick and be in a bad situation.

We also have a dog and a cat, whose we rescued, they both have a good relationship also.

We rescued the cat a year before, she was in the street, very little and with hungry and thirsty, now she is very beautiful and lovely.

With the Dog, we rescued him two months ago, he is still little, he has like four months of being born, the doctor said, he was so skinny, but now he seems very happy in the house.

So, in total, we are eight at house, counting our animals.

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My family

In my family wthere are a lot of people, m. My family is very big,. I have a lot of cousin froms on my mom's familyside.

You can also say “…on my mom’s side of the family”.

In my firstimmediate family wthere are six people, my mother, my father, my two brothers, my sister and Ime.

So I have three brothers, two older than me and one younger, t. The younger hastis sixteen years old and the older hastis twenty-nine, w. We live in a house in a centric zone, wdowntown. We have managed to have a great relationship between all of us, despites our differences and our character.

“Older than me” still works but it’s already implied who they’re older than. Also you mentioned two older brothers but only gave the age of one; which brother is 29?

I’m assuming you mean to say that you live downtown (in the centre of the city) but I’m not sure.

My family is very important to me,. I really care for them, especially my mom, s. She hais sixty years old, and my father hais sixty-two and b. Because of all thisese Covid things, we take more prevencaution when we go outside because they can get sick and bend up in a bad situation.

We also have a dog and a cat, whoseich we rescued, they also both have a good relationship also.

We rescued the cat a year before, sago. She was in the street, very little and with hungry and thirsty, n. Now she is very beautiful and lovely.

With the Dog, we rescued him two months ago, he is still little, he hais like four months of being born, tld. The doctor said, he was so skinny, but now he seems very happy in the house.

So, in total, wthere are eight atof us in the house, counting our animalpets.

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joselysv

April 7, 2021

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thank you very much!!

My family

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In my family we are a lot of people, my family is very big, I have a lot of cousin from my mom's family.

In my family wthere are a lot of people, m. My family is very big,. I have a lot of cousin froms on my mom's familyside.

You can also say “…on my mom’s side of the family”.

In my first family we are six people, my mother, my father, my two brothers, my sister and I.

In my firstimmediate family wthere are six people, my mother, my father, my two brothers, my sister and Ime.

So I have three brothers, two older than me and one younger, the younger hast sixteen years old and the older hast twenty-nine, we live in a house in a centric zone, we have managed to have a great relationship between all of us, despites our differences and our character.

So I have three brothers, two older than me and one younger, t. The younger hastis sixteen years old and the older hastis twenty-nine, w. We live in a house in a centric zone, wdowntown. We have managed to have a great relationship between all of us, despites our differences and our character.

“Older than me” still works but it’s already implied who they’re older than. Also you mentioned two older brothers but only gave the age of one; which brother is 29? I’m assuming you mean to say that you live downtown (in the centre of the city) but I’m not sure.

My family is very important to me, I really care for them, specially my mom, she has sixty years old, and my father has sixtytwo and because all this Covid things, we take more prevention when we go outside because they can get sick and be in a bad situation.

My family is very important to me,. I really care for them, especially my mom, s. She hais sixty years old, and my father hais sixty-two and b. Because of all thisese Covid things, we take more prevencaution when we go outside because they can get sick and bend up in a bad situation.

We also have a dog and a cat, whose we rescued, they both have a good relationship also.

We also have a dog and a cat, whoseich we rescued, they also both have a good relationship also.

We rescued the cat a year before, she was in the street, very little and with hungry and thirsty, now she is very beautiful and lovely.

We rescued the cat a year before, sago. She was in the street, very little and with hungry and thirsty, n. Now she is very beautiful and lovely.

With the Dog, we rescued him two months ago, he is still little, he has like four months of being born, the doctor said, he was so skinny, but now he seems very happy in the house.

With the Dog, we rescued him two months ago, he is still little, he hais like four months of being born, tld. The doctor said, he was so skinny, but now he seems very happy in the house.

So, in total, we are eight at house, counting our animals.

So, in total, wthere are eight atof us in the house, counting our animalpets.

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