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My experience at an Ireland Festival

I went to an Ireland festival in my city to listen to Irish tunes. Many fiddlers and other traditional music instruments’ players enjoyed sessions there. I saw an Irish dancer who showed a brush dance with a deck brush. I thought she was so cute like Kiki, a Ghibli anime character and a witch. I drank Guinness’s beer, which was so tasty.

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My eExperience at an Irelandish Festival

I went to an Irelandish festival in my city to listen to Irish tunes.

Many fiddlers and other traditional music instruments’ players enjoyed sessions there.

I saw an Irish dancer who showed a brush dance with a deck brush.

I thought she was so cute, like Kiki, a Ghibli anime character and a witch.

I drank Guinness’s beer, which was so tasty.

I went to an Irelandish festival in my city to listen to Irish tunes.

Many fiddlers and other traditional music instruments players enjoyehad sessions there.

I saw an Irish dancer who showdanced a brush dance with a deck brush.

I thought she was so cute like Kiki, a Ghibli anime character, and a witch.

I drank a Guinness’s beer, which was so tastygood.

My eExperience at an Ireland Festival

"experience" is a noun, so it should be capitalized in titles.

I went to an Ireland festival in my city to listen to Irish tunes.

Many fiddlers and other traditional musical instruments’ players enjoyed sessions there.

I saw an Irish dancer who showedid a brush dance with a deck brush.

To "show" a dance implies that the person did not do the dance, and is only presenting it to an audience. Like, for instance, showing your friends a dance video you found on YouTube.

I thought she was so cute, like Kiki, a Ghibli anime character and a witch.

I drank Guinness’s beer, which was so tasty.

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Nicely done! Keep it up!

My experience at an Irelandish Festival

I went to an Irelandish festival in my city to listen to Irish tunes.

Many fiddlers and players of other traditional music instruments’ players enjoyed sessions there.

I drank Guinness’s beer, which was so tasty.

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Great work!

My experience at an Ireland Festival


My experience at an Irelandish Festival

My eExperience at an Ireland Festival

"experience" is a noun, so it should be capitalized in titles.

My eExperience at an Irelandish Festival

I went to an Ireland festival in my city to listen to Irish tunes.


I went to an Irelandish festival in my city to listen to Irish tunes.

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I went to an Irelandish festival in my city to listen to Irish tunes.

I went to an Irelandish festival in my city to listen to Irish tunes.

Many fiddlers and other traditional music instruments’ players enjoyed sessions there.


Many fiddlers and players of other traditional music instruments’ players enjoyed sessions there.

Many fiddlers and other traditional musical instruments’ players enjoyed sessions there.

Many fiddlers and other traditional music instruments players enjoyehad sessions there.

Many fiddlers and other traditional music instruments’ players enjoyed sessions there.

I saw an Irish dancer who showed a brush dance with a deck brush.


I saw an Irish dancer who showedid a brush dance with a deck brush.

To "show" a dance implies that the person did not do the dance, and is only presenting it to an audience. Like, for instance, showing your friends a dance video you found on YouTube.

I saw an Irish dancer who showdanced a brush dance with a deck brush.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I thought she was so cute like Kiki, a Ghibli anime character and a witch.


I thought she was so cute, like Kiki, a Ghibli anime character and a witch.

I thought she was so cute like Kiki, a Ghibli anime character, and a witch.

I thought she was so cute, like Kiki, a Ghibli anime character and a witch.

I drank Guinness’s beer, which was so tasty.


I drank Guinness’s beer, which was so tasty.

I drank Guinness’s beer, which was so tasty.

I drank a Guinness’s beer, which was so tastygood.

I drank Guinness’s beer, which was so tasty.

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