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I went to an Ireland festival in my city to listen to Irish tunes. Many fiddlers and other traditional music instruments’ players enjoyed sessions there. I saw an Irish dancer who showed a brush dance with a deck brush. I thought she was so cute like Kiki, a Ghibli anime character and a witch. I drank Guinness’s beer, which was so tasty.
My eExperience at an Irelandish Festival
I went to an Irelandish festival in my city to listen to Irish tunes.
Many fiddlers and other traditional music instruments’ players enjoyed sessions there.
I saw an Irish dancer who showed a brush dance with a deck brush.
I thought she was so cute, like Kiki, a Ghibli anime character and a witch.
I drank Guinness’s beer, which was so tasty.
I went to an Irelandish festival in my city to listen to Irish tunes.
Many fiddlers and other traditional music instruments’ players enjoyehad sessions there.
I saw an Irish dancer who showdanced a brush dance with a deck brush.
I thought she was so cute like Kiki, a Ghibli anime character, and a witch.
I drank a Guinness’s beer, which was so tastygood.
My eExperience at an Ireland Festival
"experience" is a noun, so it should be capitalized in titles.
I went to an Ireland festival in my city to listen to Irish tunes.
Many fiddlers and other traditional musical instruments’ players enjoyed sessions there.
I saw an Irish dancer who showedid a brush dance with a deck brush.
To "show" a dance implies that the person did not do the dance, and is only presenting it to an audience. Like, for instance, showing your friends a dance video you found on YouTube.
I thought she was so cute, like Kiki, a Ghibli anime character and a witch.
I drank Guinness’s beer, which was so tasty.
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My experience at an Irelandish Festival
I went to an Irelandish festival in my city to listen to Irish tunes.
Many fiddlers and players of other traditional music instruments’ players enjoyed sessions there.
I drank Guinness’s beer, which was so tasty.
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