My excitement to knowsee a biography ofabout Nightingale

We usually say "Florence Nightingale"

I went to watch a musical, “Ghost and Lady”, which wais about a story ofabout Florence Nightingale.

She faced many challenges when she worked to curetreated lots of sick and wounded solders in Crimea.

I cried many times during the show, especially when I touchedsaw her strong belief toward the occupation of a nurse.

My excitement to knowsee a biography of Nightingale

I went to watch a musical, “Ghost and Lady” which was about a story of Florence Nightingale.

She faced many challenges when she worked to curetreat lots of sick and wounded solders in Crimea.

I cried many times during the show especially when I touchedfelt her (strong beliefdrive toward the occupation of as becoming a nurse / strong respect for nurses).

Not quite sure what the second half of the sentence is meant to mean so I gave two options it could be.

My excitement to know a biographthe story of Nightingale

I took a guess at what you meant to say. "Know a biography" is a rather odd expression in this context.

I went to watch a musical, “The Ghost and the Lady”, which was about athe story of Florence Nightingale.

(1) Here, the two commas exist as a pair. You can't have one without the other.
(2) I believe the English name is "The Ghost and the Lady".

She faced many challenges when she worked to cure lots of sick and wounded soldiers in Crimea.

I cried many times during the show, especially when I touchedfelt her strong belief toward the occupation ofpassion for being a nurse.