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my essay “fast food or home cooking. Which is better?”

I think a lot of people wondered about the question “which is better: fast food or home cooking?” and many of opinion’s are different. So in my opinion i think home cooking will be always better than the fast food. I have a lot of reasons why and maybe you will be switch on my side.
First of all, you have no idea how is going process when absolutely stranger person is cooking, this is about a sanitary and about your healthy too. In fact, is too risk to trust to someone you’re seeing for the first time. And meals from my mom and grandma always tasty and he has a special and delicious meal you can’t taste anywhere.
Second of all, when you always eating fast food, you just forgetting home-cooked food and you may get some addiction. You will be lazy to cooking at home and always will wanted food that will be right here, right now. Generally, home cooking for many people is like a therapy, i mean when you cooking and loving this process, doing with pleasure - its calming.
Third of all, when you cooking at home and buy some ingredients or you order from a restaurant, its almost identical cost. But, when you buying ingredients and cooking then, some ingredients can stay and in the future you can cook the same meal again or just try to cook something new.
So, after thinking about everything, i really believe home cooking is better than fast food. it’s cleaner, healthier, and gives you more control over what you eat. plus, it can be fun and even relaxing. fast food might be quick, but home-cooked meals are full of love, taste better, and can even save you money in the long run. that’s why i choose home cooking every time.

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I think a lot of people wondered about the question “ to themselves, which is better: fast food or home cooking?” and many of opinion’ There is no easy answer since everyone has are different opinion.

What you said made sense, it just sounded strange to a native speaker. Which is why I suggested the breaking up of the sentence into two.

So in my opinion i think home cooking will be always be better than the fast food.

I have a lot of reasons why and maybe you will be switch on my sideto support why I think that and maybe I'll be able to convince you too.

First of all, you have no idea how is going process when absolutely strangerdon't know how sanitary a person is while cooking, t. This is about a sanitary and about yourimportant to make sure you stay healthy too.

I think you are talking about how sanitary someone is going to be when they cook food. So I wrote it like that.

In fact, is too risky to trust to someone you’re seeing for the first time.

And mMeals from my mom and grandma are always tasty and he hasave a special and delicious meal youplace in my heart. I can't taste anywhere.find anything like it in the world!

Speaking it is okay to start with and, but writing it is not grammatically correct.

I don't know what you mean by "he has a special..."since you were talking about your mom and grandma, but I am going to fix it as if you didnt say "he".

Second of all, when you are always eating fast food, you just forgetting about home-cooked food and you may get some addictioned to eating out.

YouSometimes I will be lazy and not want to cooking at home and always will wanted food that will be right here,. Which makes me end up ordering fast food since I want to eat right now.

Generally, home cooking for many people is like a therapy, i mean w. When you are cooking and lovingyou love thise process, doing with pleasure - its it can be calming.

Third of all, whenif you cooking at home and buy some ingredients or you order fromto cook at home or pay for food at a restaurant, it the price is almost identical cost.

But, when you buying ingredients and cooking then, some ingredients can stay and in the futureuse them to cook you generally have some ingredients leftover. Which means you can cook the same meal again or juste them to try to cook something new.

So, after thinking aboutconsidering everything, iI really believe home cooking is better than fast food.

"after thinking about everything" is correct but sounds strange which is why I changed it.

that’s why iI choose home cookinged meals every time.

What you wrote works great. I just am writing another version, I would have wrote instead.

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Overall good job. It seems like you use -ing a lot when it isn't needed. So I would look into making some flashcards or looking online at -ing endings and when to use it and when not to. Though great job overall :)

my essay “fast food or home cooking. Which is better?”


I think a lot of people wondered about the question “which is better: fast food or home cooking?” and many of opinion’s are different.


I think a lot of people wondered about the question “ to themselves, which is better: fast food or home cooking?” and many of opinion’ There is no easy answer since everyone has are different opinion.

What you said made sense, it just sounded strange to a native speaker. Which is why I suggested the breaking up of the sentence into two.

So in my opinion i think home cooking will be always better than the fast food.


So in my opinion i think home cooking will be always be better than the fast food.

that’s why i choose home cooking every time.


that’s why iI choose home cookinged meals every time.

What you wrote works great. I just am writing another version, I would have wrote instead.

I have a lot of reasons why and maybe you will be switch on my side.


I have a lot of reasons why and maybe you will be switch on my sideto support why I think that and maybe I'll be able to convince you too.

First of all, you have no idea how is going process when absolutely stranger person is cooking, this is about a sanitary and about your healthy too.


First of all, you have no idea how is going process when absolutely strangerdon't know how sanitary a person is while cooking, t. This is about a sanitary and about yourimportant to make sure you stay healthy too.

I think you are talking about how sanitary someone is going to be when they cook food. So I wrote it like that.

In fact, is too risk to trust to someone you’re seeing for the first time.


In fact, is too risky to trust to someone you’re seeing for the first time.

And meals from my mom and grandma always tasty and he has a special and delicious meal you can’t taste anywhere.


And mMeals from my mom and grandma are always tasty and he hasave a special and delicious meal youplace in my heart. I can't taste anywhere.find anything like it in the world!

Speaking it is okay to start with and, but writing it is not grammatically correct. I don't know what you mean by "he has a special..."since you were talking about your mom and grandma, but I am going to fix it as if you didnt say "he".

Second of all, when you always eating fast food, you just forgetting home-cooked food and you may get some addiction.


Second of all, when you are always eating fast food, you just forgetting about home-cooked food and you may get some addictioned to eating out.

You will be lazy to cooking at home and always will wanted food that will be right here, right now.


YouSometimes I will be lazy and not want to cooking at home and always will wanted food that will be right here,. Which makes me end up ordering fast food since I want to eat right now.

Generally, home cooking for many people is like a therapy, i mean when you cooking and loving this process, doing with pleasure - its calming.


Generally, home cooking for many people is like a therapy, i mean w. When you are cooking and lovingyou love thise process, doing with pleasure - its it can be calming.

Third of all, when you cooking at home and buy some ingredients or you order from a restaurant, its almost identical cost.


Third of all, whenif you cooking at home and buy some ingredients or you order fromto cook at home or pay for food at a restaurant, it the price is almost identical cost.

But, when you buying ingredients and cooking then, some ingredients can stay and in the future you can cook the same meal again or just try to cook something new.


But, when you buying ingredients and cooking then, some ingredients can stay and in the futureuse them to cook you generally have some ingredients leftover. Which means you can cook the same meal again or juste them to try to cook something new.

So, after thinking about everything, i really believe home cooking is better than fast food.


So, after thinking aboutconsidering everything, iI really believe home cooking is better than fast food.

"after thinking about everything" is correct but sounds strange which is why I changed it.

it’s cleaner, healthier, and gives you more control over what you eat.


plus, it can be fun and even relaxing.


fast food might be quick, but home-cooked meals are full of love, taste better, and can even save you money in the long run.


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