my essay

our teacher gave us assignment to write a narrative essay ,so here is what i came up Everything looked fine for the family ,not knowing what tragedy awaited them.

The family was blessed by 4 children who still needed their parent’s care.

Even living in situation that does not look fine, they were happy .

the father, as the head of the family ,bore the responsibility on his shoulder worked at the hospital’s cafeteria every labor works he found that found near by there home .

the mother was not also someone like sit at home watch her husband’s hand ; she washed clothes for others , took on any job she could find to help raise their children.

Then they welcomed their new guest-their fifth child ,their third daughter -while struggling to live properly.

Not long after their journey of tragedy began.

His illness worsened over time , eventually leading to his death .

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Things gradually began to seem improved.

Her business grew eventually ; first she opened a small shop in her home ,then followed by her large shop in the city market .

She even hired employees.

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At this point she was not longer worrying about raising her children.

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She eventually bought a house, moving her family from the government-subsidized housing they had lived in.

Time passes, and the family thrived .The family now is living a very good life .The mother is no longer struggling though there is feeling of missing her gone little daughter .Years later ,the daughter, now grown, who was given for foreigners returned to find her biological family.

Her foster family was a very nice people .

They were even the one encouraged her search and even showed her where her family used to live.

unfortunately the family, had already changed their home so she can not find not only her family but also no one who knows about them since the village changes a lot .

she searched searched but nothing happened , which she went back to where she come from.

The mother who passes a lots of ups and downs heard that her daughter had come looking for her but failed to find them.

Hearing her beloved daughter , the daughter she give up on ,the daughter she missed a lot was here for but did not find her made her to lose her mind.

The mother went to crazy ,lost her mind .

She even start to look her but have not found her yet .

thinking that she might have been with her, if she had known she was her pushed her in state if mental illness.

She even went to psychiatrist to get treatment .

thinking she just lost the chance seeing her daughter made her sickness more and more worst.

As once Jhon Greenleaf Whittier quoted, “Of all sad words of tongue or pen the saddest are these ,’it might have been.’”

The father fell gravely ill ,and now the responsibility of supporting the family shifted to the mother ; she had to care of her children , earn more money not only to support the family but also for her husband’s treatment.

What things make worse than just being left alone to raise five children is losing a man who had always been in her side in her every sad ,happy and struggling moments, but now he is gone ,leaving her to induce all pain by her alone .

Then things got become more and more difficult to live without having a proper job and raising 5 children by her own ,which forcing her to make the heartbreaking decision.

She decided to give her youngest child to the foreigners ,hoping she they would offer her better life than she could.

The mother started a small business from home , preparing and selling food ingredients.

She worked tirelessly ,not wanting to defeat by life tragedy.