June 17, 2025
My dream
My dream since I was a little girl was traveling. Actually I working in finances but someday I will be around the world driving my car, readyng a lot of books.
I want to meet nice people and many animals. My favorite country is Italia, I went to there the last year and I want to back.
Mi sueño desde que era niña fue viajar. Actualmente trabajo en finanzas pero algún día estaré alrededor del mundo manejando mi carro, leyendo un montón de libros. Quiero conocer gente agradable y muchos animales. Mi país favorito es Italia, fui a ahí el año pasado y quiero regresar.
My dream
My dream since I was a little girl whas been to traveling.
ActualCurrently, I working in finances, but someday I will be traveling around the world, driving my car, and readying a lot of books.
I want to meet nice people and many animals.
My favorite country is Italia,y. I went to there the last year, and I want to go back.
My dream sSince I was a little girl, my dream was to traveling.
Actually IRight now, I am working in finances, but someday I will be driving my car around the world driving my car,and readying a lot of books.
Right now means in this moment or currently and is a better word to use in this sentence. Most english speakers use actual to say real
I want to meet nice people and see many animals.
Sounds more natural to say see many animals instead of meet. Meet is used when talking about people
My favorite country is Italia, I went to there the last year and I want to go back.
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June 18, 2025
Thank you
My dDream
My dream sSince I was a little girl , I've always dreamed of traveling.
Actually IRight now, I am working in finances but s. Someday, I will behope to be traveling around the world, driving my car, and readying a lot of books.
I divided this sentence into two separate ones.
I want to meet nice people and many animals.
My favorite country is Italiay, I went to there thhere last year and I want to go back (there).
Italia in English is Italy. What about Italy did you love?
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It's great that you've traveled to Italy. What other countries do you hope to travel to next and why?
June 18, 2025
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My dream
My dream since I was a little girl was traveling.
Actually I am working in finances but someday I will be driving my car around the world driving my car,and readying a lot of books.
"will" could be "want to" or "plan to"
I want to meet nice people and many animals.
My favorite country is Italia,y. I went to there the last year and I want to go back.
June 18, 2025
Thank you
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Actually I working in finances but someday I will be around the world driving my car, readyng a lot of books. Actually I am working in finance "will" could be "want to" or "plan to"
I divided this sentence into two separate ones.
Right now means in this moment or currently and is a better word to use in this sentence. Most english speakers use actual to say real
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