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April 25, 2025

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My dream

At the beginning of the speech.
I want to learn English and my dream level of English that i am seeking about is C1.


في بداية الحديث.
انا اريد تعلم الانجليزيه ومستوي حلمي في اللغة الذي انا اسعي إليه هو متقدم ١

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I want to learn English and my dream level of English that i am seeking about is C1.

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Almost perfect! Although the sentence is a little long and convoluted. It might be more economical to write something like:

"I want to learn English and my dream level of proficiency is C1" or "I want to learn English and my dream is to reach C1"

My dream

At the beginning of the speech.,

The phrase "At the beginning of the speech" feels disconnected and incomplete.

I want to learn English, and my dream level of English that i am seeking about is C1goal is to reach a C1 level of proficiency.

"Dream level of English" sounds awkward and unclear. "Goal" is a more appropriate word to describe the level you're aiming for.
"Seeking about" is incorrect. "Seeking" should be followed by the object you're aiming for, but "about" is unnecessary here. The sentence would be more natural if you simply say "my goal is to reach a C1 level."

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Nice work! Your message clearly expresses your goal. Just a few tweaks will make it even clearer and more polished. Keep going!

At the beginning of the speech.,

Put a comma since it is not a complete sentence it is a "prepositional phrase".

-> connect sentence.

.. I want to learn English and my dream level of English that iI am seeking aboutto achieve is C1.

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Best of luck!

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At the beginning of the speech.

The sentence is grammatically correct, but I'm not sure what you mean by it?

I want to learn English, and my dreamthe level of English that iI am seeking is about is C1.

This is okay in the original, but "level" is a bit specific for a dream. If you want to say "dream", you can say: "I dream of reaching a C1 level in English."

My dream


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At the beginning of the speech.


At the beginning of the speech.

The sentence is grammatically correct, but I'm not sure what you mean by it?

At the beginning of the speech.,

Put a comma since it is not a complete sentence it is a "prepositional phrase". -> connect sentence.

At the beginning of the speech.,

The phrase "At the beginning of the speech" feels disconnected and incomplete.

I want to learn English and my dream level of English that i am seeking about is C1.


I want to learn English, and my dreamthe level of English that iI am seeking is about is C1.

This is okay in the original, but "level" is a bit specific for a dream. If you want to say "dream", you can say: "I dream of reaching a C1 level in English."

.. I want to learn English and my dream level of English that iI am seeking aboutto achieve is C1.

I want to learn English, and my dream level of English that i am seeking about is C1goal is to reach a C1 level of proficiency.

"Dream level of English" sounds awkward and unclear. "Goal" is a more appropriate word to describe the level you're aiming for. "Seeking about" is incorrect. "Seeking" should be followed by the object you're aiming for, but "about" is unnecessary here. The sentence would be more natural if you simply say "my goal is to reach a C1 level."

I want to learn English and my dream level of English that i am seeking about is C1.

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