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Amaan

July 4, 2025

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My Diploma.

I took admission in a polytechnic institute. It's a different path from the conventional 10+2 i.e SSC + HSC. My path was 10+3 i.e SSC + 3 years of technical education. There were many few seats available for technical education. In simple terms I did diploma rather than higher secondary education. When we finished this course, our college gave us a equivalent certificate so that we may not face any issues in undergrad admissions. We can take admission directly in 2nd year of undergrad if we had done 3 years of diploma.

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My Ddiploma.

I took admissionenrolled in a polytechnic institute.

It's a different path from the conventional 10+2 i.e SSC + HSC.

My path was 10+3 i.e SSC + 3 years of technical education.

There were manonly few seatvacancies available for technical education.

In simple terms I did a diploma rather than pursue a higher secondary education.

When we finished this course, our college gave us a equivalent certificate so that we maywould not face any issues in undergrad admissions.

We can take admission directly into the 2nd year of undergrad if we hadve done a 3 years of diploma.

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Amaan

July 6, 2025

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Thanks for your feedback. It means a lot. Can you suggest me how can I improve my language skills ? and how you practice your communication skills?

I tookgot admission intted to a polytechnic institute.

There were many few seats available for technical education.

Another version: "There weren't many seats available..."

In simple terms I didgot a diploma rather than a higher secondary education.

When we finished thise course, our college gave us an equivalent certificate so that we may nowouldn't face any issues in undergrad admissions.

"this" isn't quite right, since you didn't explicitly refer to the program as a "course" beforehand, so this is more or less a first-time reference to it in this way, hence "the" would be more appropriate. You can use "this" if you want to give emphasis to the fact that you're referring to it as a course, but since the main focal point of the sentence is the certificate, this isn't necessary.

We can takeget admission directly into a 2nd year of undergrad if we had done 3 years of diploma.

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I'm not sure what your use of the word "diploma" means because I'm not familiar with your school system, but in English "diploma" usually refers to a physical object similar to a certificate that signifies your completion of a course of study, usually high school or university. You may want to review what the appropriate translation is for what you're referring to.

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Amaan

July 4, 2025

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Thanks for your feedback. It means a lot. Can you suggest me how can I improve my language skills ? and how you practice your communication skills?

My path was 10+3 i.e SSC + 3 years of technical education.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There were many few seats available for technical education.


There were many few seats available for technical education.

Another version: "There weren't many seats available..."

There were manonly few seatvacancies available for technical education.

In simple terms I did diploma rather than higher secondary education.


In simple terms I didgot a diploma rather than a higher secondary education.

In simple terms I did a diploma rather than pursue a higher secondary education.

My Diploma.


My Ddiploma.

I took admission in a polytechnic institute.


I tookgot admission intted to a polytechnic institute.

I took admissionenrolled in a polytechnic institute.

It's a different path from the conventional 10+2 i.e SSC + HSC.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When we finished this course, our college gave us a equivalent certificate so that we may not face any issues in undergrad admissions.


When we finished thise course, our college gave us an equivalent certificate so that we may nowouldn't face any issues in undergrad admissions.

"this" isn't quite right, since you didn't explicitly refer to the program as a "course" beforehand, so this is more or less a first-time reference to it in this way, hence "the" would be more appropriate. You can use "this" if you want to give emphasis to the fact that you're referring to it as a course, but since the main focal point of the sentence is the certificate, this isn't necessary.

When we finished this course, our college gave us a equivalent certificate so that we maywould not face any issues in undergrad admissions.

We can take admission directly in 2nd year of undergrad if we had done 3 years of diploma.


We can takeget admission directly into a 2nd year of undergrad if we had done 3 years of diploma.

We can take admission directly into the 2nd year of undergrad if we hadve done a 3 years of diploma.

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