Yesterday, I woke up 8am and themn I prepared the breakfast tofor my pets,. I used yogurt with this dog food.

They were so excited withfor their breakfast, t. They love to taste new flavors.

After that, I took a shower and washed my hair.

I dressed and then I made my breakfast,- two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk.

This morning was so cool and rainy, f. For that reason, I didn’t walk out with my dogs.

Yesterday, I walked out with my dogs until 3pm when the weather was better.

Yesterday I woke up 8am and themn I prepared the breakfast tofor my pets,. I used yogurt with thiseir dog food.

They were so excited withfor their breakfast, t. They love tasteing new flavors.

In formal writing, a comma shouldn't separate two clauses that can each stand alone, though people do this all the time when texting and when being casual.

I got dressed and then I made my breakfast,: two eggs with an arepa and Milo with milk.

This morning was so cool and rainy, for that reason I didn’t walk out with my dogs.

"walk with my dogs" isn't wrong, but the usual expression is "walk my dogs" with "walk" used as a transitive verb. To "walk out" usually means to leave...often abruptly or angrily! "He was so annoyed by the screaming children that he walked out."

Yesterday, I walked out with my dogs until 3pm when the weather was better.when the weather was better, I walked my dogs until 3pm.

Yesterday I woke up 8am and them I prepared the breakfast tofor my pets,. I usadded yogurt withto thise dog food.

They were so excited withfor their breakfast, t. They love tastd the taste of the new flavors.

"loved" = past tense (since you are describing something that happened in the past)

After that, I took a shower and washed my hair.

I got dressed an then Id made my breakfast,. I had two eggs with arepa, and Milo with milk.

This morning was so coolcold and rainy, f. For that reason, I didn’t walk out with my dogs.

Yesterday, I walked out with my dogs until 3pm when the weather was betterwhen the weather was better, I took my dogs for a walk until 3pm.

It would be ideal if you also mentioned the time you started walking your dogs, so as to provide the reader with appropriate context. It sounds like you walked your dogs for a long time, but it is not completely clear whether that is actually the case, because you did not state what time you started walking your dogs (or for how long).

Yesterday I woke up 8am AM and themn I prepared the breakfast tofor my pets,. I used yogurt with this dog food.

They were so excited with their breakfast, t. They love to taste new flavors.

I dressed and then I made my breakfast, two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk.

This morning was so cool and rainy, and for that reason, I didn’t walk out with my dogs.

Yesterday, I woke up 8am and themn, I prepared the breakfast tofor my pets, I used yogurt with thise dog food.

They were so excited with their breakfast, they love the taste of new flavors.

After that, I took a shower and washed my hair.

I got dressed and then, I made my breakfast, two eggs with arepa and Milo with milk.

This morning was so cool and rainy, for that reason, I didn’t walk out withnt to walk my dogs.

Yesterday, I walked out with my dogs untilat 3pm, when the weather was better.