Sept. 8, 2025
My Day
Today, it was the start of the week so I went to school. I saw my friends so that was cool. I had lucnh with other friends from other classes at midday. It was cool, we ate at the Mcdo. I was just a bit sad because I had a sport class but we didn't do sport because we had to choose a menue to determinate what we will do during the year (different activities). So I choose a menu with 3 x 500 metters (run), dance (I don't like it but it may will be funny) and volley (I don't play often but I love this sport) and I will do sport class with friends so it is very cool. Globally, it was a good day.
Aujourd'hui c'était la fin du week end donc je suis allé au lycée. J'ai vu mes amis donc c'était cool. J'ai déjeuner avec d'autres amis d'autres classes à midi. C'était cool, on a mangé à mcdo. J'étais juste un peu triste parce qu'on avait sport mais on a pas fait de sport parce que on devait choisir un menu pour déterminer ce qu'on ferait durant l'année (les différentes activités). Donc j'ai choisi un menu avec 3x500 mètres (course), dance (j'aime pas mais ça sera peut être drôle) et volley (je joue pas souvent mais j'adore ce sport) et je ferais du sport avec des amis donc ça sera vraiment cool. Globalement, c'était une bonne journée.
I had lucnch with my other friends from other classes at midday.
It was cool, we ate at the McdoDonalds.
"Mcdo" isn't used in English.
I was just a bit sad because I had a sports class but we didn't do any sport because we had to choose a menue to determinate what we will do during the year (different activities).
So I choose a menu with 3 x 500 metters (run), dance (I don't like it but it maybe it will be funny) and volleyball (I don't play often but I love this sport) and I will do sports class with friends so it iswhich would be very cool.
GlobOverally, it was a good day.
"Globally" means across the globe, meaning that it was a good day on the entirety of the planet.
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Good job
Sept. 9, 2025
thanks !
My Day
Today, it was the start of the week so I went to school.
I saw my friends, so that was cool.
I had lucnh with other friends from other classes at middaynoon.
midday is correct but noon is better
It was cool, we ate at the Mcdo.
XD Mcdo as a nickname is very French... in English you would just say McDonalds
I was just a bit sad because I had a sports class but we didn't do sport because we had to choose a menueplan to determinate what we will do during the year (different activities).
So I choose a menuplan / schedule with 3 x 500 metters (run), dance (I don't like it but it may will bebe fun / funny) and volleyball (I don't play often but I love this sport) and I will do sport class with friends, so it ithat's very cool.
GlobAll in ally, it was a good day.
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good job :)
Sept. 9, 2025
Thanks !
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Today, it was the start of the week so I went to school. Today |
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I saw my friends so that was cool. I saw my friends, so that was cool. |
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I had lucnh with other friends from other classes at midday. I had lucnh with other friends from other classes at midday is correct but noon is better I had lu |
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It was cool, we ate at the Mcdo. It was cool, we ate at the Mcdo. XD Mcdo as a nickname is very French... in English you would just say McDonalds It was cool, we ate at the Mc "Mcdo" isn't used in English. |
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I was just a bit sad because I had a sport class but we didn't do sport because we had to choose a menue to determinate what we will do during the year (different activities). I was just a bit sad because I had a sports class but we didn't do sport because we had to choose a I was just a bit sad because I had a sports class but we didn't do any sport because we had to choose a menu |
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So I choose a menu with 3 x 500 metters (run), dance (I don't like it but it may will be funny) and volley (I don't play often but I love this sport) and I will do sport class with friends so it is very cool. So I cho So I cho |
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Globally, it was a good day.
"Globally" means across the globe, meaning that it was a good day on the entirety of the planet. |
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