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Hermann

June 10, 2025

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My day

To day i woke up 5 am, i prayed and i sleeped for woke up 8 am.
I am washed and i eat my breakfast. After i learned English.
In afternoon i sleeped again(😂), afert i eat my dinner, and i readed my book.
I paste my longue day in social media.

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To day iI woke up at 5 am, i. I prayed and i sleeped forpt again. Then, I woke up at 8 am.

I am washed up and i eat ate (my) breakfast.

After i learnwards, I studied English.

In the afternoon i, I sleepedt again(😂), afert i eat . Then, I ate (my) dinner, and i readed my book.

I paoste my longued about my day ion social media.

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Relaxing day!

My dDay

To day iI woke up 5 am, iI prayed and i sleeped for woke up, I went back to bed, and I woke back up at 8 am.

I am wasshowered/bathed and i eate my breakfast.

After i learnwards, I studied English.

In the afternoon iI sleepedpt again (😂), afert i eat my. Then I ate dinner, and i readed my book.

Lastly, I paosted about my longue day ion social media.

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Good job.

My dDay

Title case has weird capitalization rules.

To day iI woke up 5 am, iI prayed, and iI sleeped for woke uppt until 8 am.

"sleep" is a word with an irregular past tense version. Since you have a list of more than two actions, they should be treated and punctuated as a series. I think "sleeped for woke up 8 am." means what I put, but it is a little bit unclear as originally written.

I am washed and i eI ate my breakfast.

"eat" also has an irregular plural form

After i learn, I studied English.

The comma is necessary because if you don't have it, it is a dependent clause and thus an incomplete sentence. So you could say:

After, I studied English.

OR:

After I studied English, I _________________________________. (you would have to fill in the blank)

Also, if you say "learned," it sounds like you have completed it, rather than working on it but still needing to work on it more. For example, I say "I studied Spanish." or "I practiced with Spanish."

In the afternoon iI sleepedt again (😂), afert i eatI ate my dinner, and iI readed my book.

"read" also has an irregular past tense form

This is another series of actions. "Series" is a technical grammar term, but it just means a list of more than two things, where each thing EXCEPT the last one has a comma after it.

I paosted about my longue day ion social media.

Did you make social media posts? If so,, then "posted" is a better word here.

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I understood your main purpose for writing, and the errors weren´t too serious. Nice!

To day iI woke up 5 am, i prayed and i sleeped forpt until I woke up 8 am.

Le passé-composé de «sleep» est «slept».

I am washed up and i eI ate my breakfast.

Le passé-composé de «eat» est «ate».

After i learnthat I studied English.

«Learn» est «apprendre», donc vous avez dit «J'ai appris l'anglais». Je pense que vous voulez dire «j'ai étudié l'anglais», et «étudier» est «study».

In the afternoon i, I sleepedpt again(😂), aftert i e that I ate my dinner, and iI readed my book.

Le mot «read» est un peu bizarre en anglais. Le présent est «read» prononcé avec un son «ee» long. Le passé-composé s'écrit aussi «read» mais il se prononce comme dans le couleur «red» (rouge).

I paste myspent a longue day using social media.

Pour «passer la journée», on utilise le verbe «spend», et le passé-composé est «spent».

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Bravo ! J'espère que mes explications étaient compréhensibles. J'apprends encore le français :)

My dDay

To day iI woke up at 5 am, i prayed and i sleeped for woke up, then went back to sleep until 8 am.

I am washed and i eat myshowered and ate breakfast.

After i learn, I studied English.

In the afternoon i, I sleepedpt again(😂), afert i e. Later, I ate my dinner, and i readed my book.

Finally, I paosted details of my longue day ion social media.

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You have a good starting point!

jberhow's avatar
jberhow

June 11, 2025

1

This is the best sounding correction to me.

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Alejandro77

June 11, 2025

4

Thank you! Don’t hesitate to reach out with questions.

My day


My dDay

My dDay

Title case has weird capitalization rules.

My dDay

To day i woke up 5 am, i prayed and i sleeped for woke up 8 am.


To day iI woke up at 5 am, i prayed and i sleeped for woke up, then went back to sleep until 8 am.

To day iI woke up 5 am, i prayed and i sleeped forpt until I woke up 8 am.

Le passé-composé de «sleep» est «slept».

To day iI woke up 5 am, iI prayed, and iI sleeped for woke uppt until 8 am.

"sleep" is a word with an irregular past tense version. Since you have a list of more than two actions, they should be treated and punctuated as a series. I think "sleeped for woke up 8 am." means what I put, but it is a little bit unclear as originally written.

To day iI woke up 5 am, iI prayed and i sleeped for woke up, I went back to bed, and I woke back up at 8 am.

To day iI woke up at 5 am, i. I prayed and i sleeped forpt again. Then, I woke up at 8 am.

I am washed and i eat my breakfast.


I am washed and i eat myshowered and ate breakfast.

I am washed up and i eI ate my breakfast.

Le passé-composé de «eat» est «ate».

I am washed and i eI ate my breakfast.

"eat" also has an irregular plural form

I am wasshowered/bathed and i eate my breakfast.

I am washed up and i eat ate (my) breakfast.

After i learned English.


After i learn, I studied English.

After i learnthat I studied English.

«Learn» est «apprendre», donc vous avez dit «J'ai appris l'anglais». Je pense que vous voulez dire «j'ai étudié l'anglais», et «étudier» est «study».

After i learn, I studied English.

The comma is necessary because if you don't have it, it is a dependent clause and thus an incomplete sentence. So you could say: After, I studied English. OR: After I studied English, I _________________________________. (you would have to fill in the blank) Also, if you say "learned," it sounds like you have completed it, rather than working on it but still needing to work on it more. For example, I say "I studied Spanish." or "I practiced with Spanish."

After i learnwards, I studied English.

After i learnwards, I studied English.

In afternoon i sleeped again(😂), afert i eat my dinner, and i readed my book.


In the afternoon i, I sleepedpt again(😂), afert i e. Later, I ate my dinner, and i readed my book.

In the afternoon i, I sleepedpt again(😂), aftert i e that I ate my dinner, and iI readed my book.

Le mot «read» est un peu bizarre en anglais. Le présent est «read» prononcé avec un son «ee» long. Le passé-composé s'écrit aussi «read» mais il se prononce comme dans le couleur «red» (rouge).

In the afternoon iI sleepedt again (😂), afert i eatI ate my dinner, and iI readed my book.

"read" also has an irregular past tense form This is another series of actions. "Series" is a technical grammar term, but it just means a list of more than two things, where each thing EXCEPT the last one has a comma after it.

In the afternoon iI sleepedpt again (😂), afert i eat my. Then I ate dinner, and i readed my book.

In the afternoon i, I sleepedt again(😂), afert i eat . Then, I ate (my) dinner, and i readed my book.

I paste my longue day in social media.


Finally, I paosted details of my longue day ion social media.

I paste myspent a longue day using social media.

Pour «passer la journée», on utilise le verbe «spend», et le passé-composé est «spent».

I paosted about my longue day ion social media.

Did you make social media posts? If so,, then "posted" is a better word here.

Lastly, I paosted about my longue day ion social media.

I paoste my longued about my day ion social media.

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