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Renata_Ferreira08

May 27, 2025

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My day

Today, I woke up at 7 0'clock and gone to gym.
When I gone to my house, I toke a shower and I gove shower to my dog Julieta.
After that had lunch it was soup, and a sandwich with eggs and watermelon.
I'm a receptionist in a hotel, but I'm a travel consultant independent , and if you share my work, my instagram is @exploramais_viagens, and I gove creat posts.
After dinner I has learning English before my formation about my work.

Good Night friends! And I help me with my work please! But not so much important help me help me with my English!

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Today, I woke up at 7 0o'clock and gone towent to the gym.

When I gonet (back) to my house, I tooke a shower and I gove shower towashed my dog Julieta.

After that I had lunch, it was soup, and a sandwich with eggs and watermelon.

I'm a receptionist in a hotel, but I'm a travel consultalso ant independent , and if you shartravel consultant. If you want to see my work, my instagram is @exploramais_viagens, and I glove creating posts.

After dinner I hwas learning English before my fwormation about my workk training.

Formation doesn't really make sense here, did you mean something like training?

Good Nnight friends!

And I help me with my work please!

But not so much important help meNot as important, but also help me with my English!

Today, I woke up at 7 0'clock and gonewent to gym.

When I gone to myt housme, I tooke a shower and I goave shower to my dog Julieta a shower.

After that, I had lunch it was. I had soup, and a sandwich with eggs and some watermelon.

I'm normally work as a receptionist inat a hotel, but I'm a travel consultant independent , and if you share my work, my instagram is @exploramais_viagens, and I gove creat postson the side I'm a contract travel consultant.

Please don't advertise your personal stuff on here.

After dinner, I has learningmake time to study English before my formation abheading out myto work.

Not sure what you mean here.

Good Nnight, friends!

And IPlease, help me with my work please!

But not so much important help me help me with my English!

Today, I woke up at 7 0o'clock and gone towent to the gym.

When I gonecame back to my house, I tooke a shower and I goave shower to my dog Julieta a bath.

Usually for animals and babies it sounds better when you say give/gave a bath

After that I had lunch i. It was some soup, and a sandwich with eggs and watermelon.

I'm a receptionist inat a hotel, but I'm an independent travel consultant independent , and if you share my line of work, my instagram is @exploramais_viagens, and I govmake cgreat posts.

After dinner I has learninged English before my formation about my work.

I don't know what you mean by formation, do you mean work shift? If so than you can say before my work shift or just shift.

Good Nnight friends!

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Renata_Ferreira08

May 27, 2025

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thank you for your feddback.
Formation I mean a 1 hour in my "school" with my " teacher" than help me on travel consultant.
Do you understand?

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KatMaria

May 27, 2025

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Aha, perhaps you can say consultation, meeting or even training in that case.

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Renata_Ferreira08

May 27, 2025

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Thank you so much!

Today, I woke up at 7 0'clock and gone towent to the gym.

When I gone to myAfter I leaving housme, I tooke a shower and I goave shower to my dog, Julieta.

After that, I had lunch it was soup, and a sandwich with eggsconsisting of an egg sandwich, soup, and watermelon.

After dinner I has learningstudied English before my formation about myfinishing work.

Good Nnight, friends!

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Renata_Ferreira08

May 27, 2025

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thank you!

My day


Today, I woke up at 7 0'clock and gone to gym.


Today, I woke up at 7 0'clock and gone towent to the gym.

Today, I woke up at 7 0o'clock and gone towent to the gym.

Today, I woke up at 7 0'clock and gonewent to gym.

Today, I woke up at 7 0o'clock and gone towent to the gym.

When I gone to my house, I toke a shower and I gove shower to my dog Julieta.


When I gone to myAfter I leaving housme, I tooke a shower and I goave shower to my dog, Julieta.

When I gonecame back to my house, I tooke a shower and I goave shower to my dog Julieta a bath.

Usually for animals and babies it sounds better when you say give/gave a bath

When I gone to myt housme, I tooke a shower and I goave shower to my dog Julieta a shower.

When I gonet (back) to my house, I tooke a shower and I gove shower towashed my dog Julieta.

After that had lunch it was soup, and a sandwich with eggs and watermelon.


After that, I had lunch it was soup, and a sandwich with eggsconsisting of an egg sandwich, soup, and watermelon.

After that I had lunch i. It was some soup, and a sandwich with eggs and watermelon.

After that, I had lunch it was. I had soup, and a sandwich with eggs and some watermelon.

After that I had lunch, it was soup, and a sandwich with eggs and watermelon.

I'm a receptionist in a hotel, but I'm a travel consultant independent , and if you share my work, my instagram is @exploramais_viagens, and I gove creat posts.


I'm a receptionist inat a hotel, but I'm an independent travel consultant independent , and if you share my line of work, my instagram is @exploramais_viagens, and I govmake cgreat posts.

I'm normally work as a receptionist inat a hotel, but I'm a travel consultant independent , and if you share my work, my instagram is @exploramais_viagens, and I gove creat postson the side I'm a contract travel consultant.

Please don't advertise your personal stuff on here.

I'm a receptionist in a hotel, but I'm a travel consultalso ant independent , and if you shartravel consultant. If you want to see my work, my instagram is @exploramais_viagens, and I glove creating posts.

After dinner I has learning English before my formation about my work.


After dinner I has learningstudied English before my formation about myfinishing work.

After dinner I has learninged English before my formation about my work.

I don't know what you mean by formation, do you mean work shift? If so than you can say before my work shift or just shift.

After dinner, I has learningmake time to study English before my formation abheading out myto work.

Not sure what you mean here.

After dinner I hwas learning English before my fwormation about my workk training.

Formation doesn't really make sense here, did you mean something like training?

Good Night friends!


Good Nnight, friends!

Good Nnight friends!

Good Nnight, friends!

Good Nnight friends!

And I help me with my work please!


And IPlease, help me with my work please!

And I help me with my work please!

But not so much important help me help me with my English!


But not so much important help me help me with my English!

But not so much important help meNot as important, but also help me with my English!

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