menna_yasser's avatar
menna_yasser

Sept. 17, 2025

0
My daily routine

Hello , my name is menna yasser . Iam really excited to talk about my daily routine. Iam wake up at 6 Oclock and the first thing I do it is make my bed , after that go to the kitchen and drink a tool glass of water and write my to do list and starting my beautiful day .


مرحبا انا منة ياسر انا متحمسه اني احكي عن روتيني اليومي انا استيقظ الساعه السادسة صباحا وأول حاجه بعملها اني برتب سريري وبعد كده بروح المطبخ واشرب كوباية مياة كبيرة وبعدين بكتب قائمة المهام بتاعتي وببدأ يومي الجميل

englishdailypractice
Corrections

Hello , my name is mMenna yYasser .

Names are a proper noun and therefore need capitalisation :)

I am really excited to talk about my daily routine.

Iam wake up at 6 Oo'clock and the first thing I do it is make my bed ,; after that, I go to the kitchen and drink a tooall glass of water and write my to do list andto starting my beautiful day .

I replaced your comma with a semicolon (, -> ;) and semicolons are hard to use in English but they basically put two sentences together that do make sense on their own but can also be linked. I felt like a semicolon worked better in place of your comma here :)

"Tool" = object - equipment for something (e.g., a hammer is a tool for knocking in nails)
"Tall" = adjective

Also, no spaces before a full stop or before a comma (only after).

Feedback

Good job :)

menna_yasser's avatar
menna_yasser

Sept. 18, 2025

0

Thank you

My daily routine


Hello , my name is menna yasser .


Hello , my name is mMenna yYasser .

Names are a proper noun and therefore need capitalisation :)

Iam really excited to talk about my daily routine.


I am really excited to talk about my daily routine.

Iam wake up at 6 Oclock and the first thing I do it is make my bed , after that go to the kitchen and drink a tool glass of water and write my to do list and starting my beautiful day .


Iam wake up at 6 Oo'clock and the first thing I do it is make my bed ,; after that, I go to the kitchen and drink a tooall glass of water and write my to do list andto starting my beautiful day .

I replaced your comma with a semicolon (, -> ;) and semicolons are hard to use in English but they basically put two sentences together that do make sense on their own but can also be linked. I felt like a semicolon worked better in place of your comma here :) "Tool" = object - equipment for something (e.g., a hammer is a tool for knocking in nails) "Tall" = adjective Also, no spaces before a full stop or before a comma (only after).

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium