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elkincorreah12

April 10, 2025

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my daily routine

the alarms goes off 8 a.m. I wake up, I get out of bed, I take a shower, 10 minutes later, i get dressed, I make breackfast and I eat, 15 minutes later, I go to the bathroom and brush the teeth. then, I go to work at 9:30 a.m on the my motorcycle. I arrrive at work at 10 a.m. I work from 10 a.m to 8 p.m.

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my daily routine

theMy alarms goes off 8 a.m.

"The" is technically correct, but "my" makes more sense
Unless you have multiple alarms, it should just be alarm instead of alarms

I wake up, I get out of bed, and then I take a shower,. 10 minutes later, iI get dressed,. After that I make breackfast and I eat,. 15 minutes later, I go to the bathroom and brush themy teeth.

When you're writing a sequence, it's better to have every few actions be its own sentence, though it isn't incorrect to put them all in one sentence

tThen, I go to work at 9:30 a.m on the my motorcycle.

I arrrive at work at 10 a.m.

I work from 10 a.m to 8 p.m.

mMy daily routine

theMy alarms goes off at 8 a.m.

You could also use "the" instead of "my" in this sentence, since the alarm is something specific and unique: "The alarm goes off..."

I wake up, I get out of bed, Iand take a shower,. 10 minutes later, iI get dressed, Ithen make and eat breackfast and I eat,. 15 minutes later, I go to the bathroom and brush themy teeth.

In a list of actions like this, you can leave out "I" in every action after the first, and it will sound more natural.
Also, I've put periods instead of commas to break this up into multiple sentences rather than one long list.
And, one final thing: when talking about a part of your body, you almost always must use a possessive pronoun ("my", "your", "their", "our"), not "the".

tThen, I go to work at 9:30 a.m on the my motorcycle.

"The" never comes before "my."

I arrrive at work at 10 a.m.

I work from 10 a.m to 8 p.m.

This and the last sentence could be linked. For example: "I arrive at work at 10 a.m, and I work until 8 p.m."

mMy dDaily rRoutine

Important words in title need capital letter.

tThe alarms goes off at 8 a.m.

'alarm' singular as 'goes' is third person singular form. 'at' a specific team.

I wake up, I get out of bed, I and take a shower, 10. Ten minutes later, iI get dressed, I make breackfast and I eat, 15. Fifteen minutes later, I go to the bathroom and brush themy teeth.

I have broken this up into several sentences. You don't need to repeat the pronoun 'I' it will be assumed. You brush 'your' teeth or wash 'your' hands. Do no use 'the hands' etc in situations like this.

tThen, I go to work at 9:30 a.m. on the my motorcycle.

Don't need the 'the'. a.m. not a.m

I arrrive at work at 10 a.m.

I work from 10 a.m. to 8 p.m.

Feedback

Good work.

mMy daily routine

tThe alarms goes off 8 a.m.

I wake up, I get out of bed, I take a shower,. 10 minutes later, iI get dressed, I make breackfast and I eat,. 15 minutes later, I go to the bathroom and brush themy teeth.

tThen, I go to work at 9:30 a.m on the my motorcycle.

I arrrive at work at 10 a.m.

Feedback

Great work!

mMy dDaily rRoutine

tThe alarms goes off 8 a.m.

I wake up, I get out of bed, Iand take a shower,. 10 minutes later, iI get dressed, I make breackfast, and I eat,. 15 minutes lafter that, I go to the bathroom and brush themy teeth.

If you already stated the subject "I" and you're making a list of things you're doing, it's not necessary to repeat "I" throughout the whole list. It's not incorrect, but this is a stylistic suggestion to make it sound more concise and less monotonous.

I changed "later" to "after that" because it sounds betteer than repeating the same word.

tThen, I go to work at 9:30 a.m. on the my motorcycle.

In this case, you could also say: "Then I leave for work at 9:30 a.m. on my motorcycle." This sounds more idiomatic.

I arrrive at work at 10 a.m.

I work from 10 a.m to 8 p.m.

Feedback

Overall very good, but keep in mind that punctuation and capitalization is very important in English. They rest was very good. :)

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elkincorreah12

April 10, 2025

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thanks for you help. I will keep your advice in mind.

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AllSubNoDub

April 10, 2025

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"The rest was very good."** (Even native speakers make typos and mistakes sometimes, haha.)

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elkincorreah12

April 10, 2025

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hahaha, making mistakes is human too.

my daily routine


mMy dDaily rRoutine

mMy daily routine

mMy dDaily rRoutine

Important words in title need capital letter.

mMy daily routine

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the alarms goes off 8 a.m.


tThe alarms goes off 8 a.m.

tThe alarms goes off 8 a.m.

tThe alarms goes off at 8 a.m.

'alarm' singular as 'goes' is third person singular form. 'at' a specific team.

theMy alarms goes off at 8 a.m.

You could also use "the" instead of "my" in this sentence, since the alarm is something specific and unique: "The alarm goes off..."

theMy alarms goes off 8 a.m.

"The" is technically correct, but "my" makes more sense Unless you have multiple alarms, it should just be alarm instead of alarms

I wake up, I get out of bed, I take a shower, 10 minutes later, i get dressed, I make breackfast and I eat, 15 minutes later, I go to the bathroom and brush the teeth.


I wake up, I get out of bed, Iand take a shower,. 10 minutes later, iI get dressed, I make breackfast, and I eat,. 15 minutes lafter that, I go to the bathroom and brush themy teeth.

If you already stated the subject "I" and you're making a list of things you're doing, it's not necessary to repeat "I" throughout the whole list. It's not incorrect, but this is a stylistic suggestion to make it sound more concise and less monotonous. I changed "later" to "after that" because it sounds betteer than repeating the same word.

I wake up, I get out of bed, I take a shower,. 10 minutes later, iI get dressed, I make breackfast and I eat,. 15 minutes later, I go to the bathroom and brush themy teeth.

I wake up, I get out of bed, I and take a shower, 10. Ten minutes later, iI get dressed, I make breackfast and I eat, 15. Fifteen minutes later, I go to the bathroom and brush themy teeth.

I have broken this up into several sentences. You don't need to repeat the pronoun 'I' it will be assumed. You brush 'your' teeth or wash 'your' hands. Do no use 'the hands' etc in situations like this.

I wake up, I get out of bed, Iand take a shower,. 10 minutes later, iI get dressed, Ithen make and eat breackfast and I eat,. 15 minutes later, I go to the bathroom and brush themy teeth.

In a list of actions like this, you can leave out "I" in every action after the first, and it will sound more natural. Also, I've put periods instead of commas to break this up into multiple sentences rather than one long list. And, one final thing: when talking about a part of your body, you almost always must use a possessive pronoun ("my", "your", "their", "our"), not "the".

I wake up, I get out of bed, and then I take a shower,. 10 minutes later, iI get dressed,. After that I make breackfast and I eat,. 15 minutes later, I go to the bathroom and brush themy teeth.

When you're writing a sequence, it's better to have every few actions be its own sentence, though it isn't incorrect to put them all in one sentence

then, ii go to work at 9:30 a.m on the my motorcycle.


i arrrive at work at 10 a.m.


I work from 10 a.m to 8 p.m.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I work from 10 a.m. to 8 p.m.

I work from 10 a.m to 8 p.m.

This and the last sentence could be linked. For example: "I arrive at work at 10 a.m, and I work until 8 p.m."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

then, I go to work at 9:30 a.m on the my motorcycle.


tThen, I go to work at 9:30 a.m. on the my motorcycle.

In this case, you could also say: "Then I leave for work at 9:30 a.m. on my motorcycle." This sounds more idiomatic.

tThen, I go to work at 9:30 a.m on the my motorcycle.

tThen, I go to work at 9:30 a.m. on the my motorcycle.

Don't need the 'the'. a.m. not a.m

tThen, I go to work at 9:30 a.m on the my motorcycle.

"The" never comes before "my."

tThen, I go to work at 9:30 a.m on the my motorcycle.

I arrrive at work at 10 a.m.


I arrrive at work at 10 a.m.

I arrrive at work at 10 a.m.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I arrrive at work at 10 a.m.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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