Dec. 21, 2024
My dad
I had a father who worked hard just to make us happy, spent his whole life working with out any rest . he had worked his entire life without rest and yet do not feel any tiredness till his last breath, battling a challenging disease . He was always working while his friends sit and chat together even if he wanted to join them. He was usually out of the town to make money so that we can learn in really good school ,only came when holidays come around .He puts out safety, comfort, happiness before his healthy and rest. He was a very kind and lovely father until one dreadful day that separate us .He is my hero who taught and showed that everything is possible . It was far from easy to accept the truth of his death ; It deeply hurts me the fact that he passed away wanting rest but couldn't find it because of me.
I had a father who worked hard just to make us happy, spent his whole life working with out any rest .
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He was a verreally kind and lovely father until one dreadful day that separates us .from him. He is my hero who taught and showed that everything is possible ; within our reach.
It was far fromnever easy to accept the truthfact of his death ; It deeply hurts me that the fact that he passed away wanting rest but couldn't find it because ofbecause of me and he deserved more rest without me.
I had a father who worked hard just to make us happy, and spent his whole life working with out any rest .
hHe had worked his entire life without rest and yet doid not feel any tiredness till his last breath, battling a challenging disease .
He was always working while his friends siat around and chatted together even ifthough he wanted to join them.
He was usually out of the town to make money so that we can learn in a really good school ,and only came wback during then holidays come around . He puts out safety, comfort, and happiness before his healthy and rest.
He was a very kind and lovely father until one dreadful day that separated us . He is my hero who taught and showed me that everything is possible .
It was far from easy to accept the truthreality of his death ; It deeply hurts me of the fact that he passed away wanting [to] rest but couldn't find it because of me.
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Good job! I'm sorry for your loss and offer my condolences. Your father sounds like a wonderful man that sacrificed a lot in life to provide you the best life that he could. That's a true characteristic of a kind and loving father. It seems you feel some guilt or remorse that his sacrifices were done to provide for you. If you have any children or are considering having children, I think you can carry on his legacy by reminding them of the kindhearted man their grandfather was as well as taking the lessons that your father taught you and being a caring father to your own children in hopes that they can live a better life than you which will get passed down for generations.
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He was usually out of the town to make money so that we can learn in really good school ,only came when holidays come around .He puts out safety, comfort, happiness before his healthy and rest. He was usually out of He was usually out of |
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I had a father who worked hard just to make us happy, spent his whole life working with out any rest . I had a father who worked hard just to make us happy I had a father who worked hard just to make us happy, spent his whole life working with |
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He was a very kind and lovely father until one dreadful day that separate us .He is my hero who taught and showed that everything is possible . He was a very kind and lovely father until one dreadful day He was a |
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It was far from easy to accept the truth of his death ; It deeply hurts me the fact that he passed away wanting rest but couldn't find it because of me. It was far from easy to accept the It was |
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