May 3, 2021
My comments for My Octopus Teacher in Netflix, Part 1
My scanty knowledge of an octopus is that it is a mollusk and has eight legs. Also, after it is boiled into hot water, it's color turn to be red and body which is soft and pliable become hard and stiff. People who love eating seafoods in the world are familiar with the taste of an octopus. Though they have never known how an octopus life is so tragic and harsh.
A researcher had chased a certain octopus which is a female for making relationship with her. Surprisingly, the octopus had noticed and trusted him who won't hurt or catch her. One day that octopus was in palm of his hand looks like his pet and he stroked the octopus body.
To be honest, I didn't think that an octopus attach to a human.
The film showed us how an octopus is so wise and creative ( Is it only this female octopus ? I am not sure about it ). For instance, the octopus hid inside of kelps after she wrapped a lot of kelps on her body for removing her smell from a shark , which pursued for eating her. Moreover. she grabbed so many shells and put them in whole her body for protection even though a shark bit her many times, those shells prevented her body from sharp-edged teeth of a shark. So, finally the shark gave up for eating her.
To be continue Part 2.
My scanty knowledge of an octopus is that it is a mollusk and has eight legs.
Also, after it is boiled into hot water, it's color turn to bes red and the body which is usualy soft and pliable becomes hard and stiff.
People who love eating seafoods in across the world are familiar with the taste of an octopus.
Though they havelikely never knownew how an octopus' life is so tragic and harsh.
AIn the movie, a researcher had chased a certain female octopus which is a female for makingin order to have a relationship with her.
Surprisingly, the octopus had noticed and trusted him who won'to not hurt or catch her.
One day thate octopus was in the palm of his hand and looksed like his pet ands he stroked the octopusr body.
To be honest, I didn't think that an octopus could feel attached to a human.
The film showed us how an octopus iscan be so wise and creative ( Iis it only this specific female octopus ? I am not sure about it that).
Not sure if you want to say 'only the specific octopus in the movie' (which is the current correction) or if you want to say 'is it only female octupi' which would be better corrected as - Is it only female octupi?
*Note that both 'octupi' and 'octupuses' are acceptable plural forms of 'octupus'.
For instance, the octopus hid inside of some kelps after she wrapped a lot of kelps on around her body forto removinge her smell from a shark , which was pursued for eating her.
'To eat her' could be written, but can be taken as implied by the situation.
Moreover.As well,
she grabbed so many shells and put them ion the whole of her body for protection e. Even though athe shark bit her many times, those shells prevented her body from being harmed by the sharp-edged teeth of athe shark.
'Sharp teeth' also works
So, finally the shark gave up foron eating her.
To be continue d in Part 2.
Feedback
Good job! A few grammar and flow issues, but all made sense.
I also watched this movie recently and found it very interesting!
May 4, 2021
Thank you so much your correction for my writing and your feedback. I appreciate it. Have a nice day !
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My comments for My Octopus Teacher in Netflix, Part 1 |
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My scanty knowledge of an octopus is that it is a mollusk and has eight legs. My scant |
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Also, after it is boiled into hot water, it's color turn to be red and body which is soft and pliable become hard and stiff. Also, after it is boiled in |
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People who love eating seafoods in the world are familiar with the taste of an octopus. People who love eating seafood |
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Though they have never known how an octopus life is so tragic and harsh. Though they |
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A researcher had chased a certain octopus which is a female for making relationship with her.
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Surprisingly, the octopus had noticed and trusted him who won't hurt or catch her. Surprisingly, the octopus |
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One day that octopus was in palm of his hand looks like his pet and he stroked the octopus body. One day th |
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To be honest, I didn't think that an octopus attach to a human. To be honest, I didn't think that an octopus could feel attached to a human. |
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The film showed us how an octopus is so wise and creative ( Is it only this female octopus ? I am not sure about it ). The film showed us how an octopus Not sure if you want to say 'only the specific octopus in the movie' (which is the current correction) or if you want to say 'is it only female octupi' which would be better corrected as - Is it only female octupi? *Note that both 'octupi' and 'octupuses' are acceptable plural forms of 'octupus'. |
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For instance, the octopus hid inside of kelps after she wrapped a lot of kelps on her body for removing her smell from a shark , which pursued for eating her. For instance, the octopus hid inside of some kelp 'To eat her' could be written, but can be taken as implied by the situation. |
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Moreover.
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she grabbed so many shells and put them in whole her body for protection even though a shark bit her many times, those shells prevented her body from sharp-edged teeth of a shark. she grabbed 'Sharp teeth' also works |
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So, finally the shark gave up for eating her. So, finally the shark gave up |
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To be continue Part 2. To be continue |
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