June 11, 2025
My comfort place
My life always has been terribly chaotic; in my everyday life, I struggle a lot with schoolwork, house chores, sibling quarrels, socializing with people and friends (I am very bad at communicating with people), time management, and academic pressure, all of which increase the pressure exerted upon my head. Therefore, after a long, energy-drained day, the only thing I long for is a quiet moment to help me reflect and focus on myself and my well-being.
At the present, the only place that keep me relaxed is my bedroom—my mental sanctuary, my personal space in which I can completely clear away all the depressing thoughts of reality and gain hope for my future. Even though my space is sometimes messy with strewn books on the floors and tables, it still creates an inviting atmosphere that welcomes me warmly. My cozy little bed beside the window offers me the kind of soothing comfort that I will never get from other people. In this room, I find solace in reading great mystery books, listening to my favorite music, sketching some semi-realistic pictures, watching movies, or simply just scrolling through academic aesthetic photos on Pinterest. In my private space, I find it relaxing and enjoying myself doing my favorite activities.
My cComfort pPlace
Titles are usually written in title case, which has special capitalization rules.
My life always has been terribly chaotic; in my everyday life, I struggle a lot with schoolwork, house chores, sibling quarrels, socializing with people and friends (I am very bad at communicating with people), time management, and academic pressure, all of which increase the pressure exerted upon my head.
Therefore, after a long, energy-drained day, the only thing I long for is a quiet moment to help me reflect and focus on myself and my well-being.
At the present, the only place that keeps me relaxed is my bedroom—my mental sanctuary, my personal space in which I can completely clear away all the depressing thoughts of reality and gain hope for my future.
The commonly seen phrase is "at present." People also say "at the present moment."
Place is a singular noun, so the verb should be "keeps."
Even though my space is sometimes messy with strewn books on the floors and tables, it still creates an inviting atmosphere that welcomes me warmly.
My cozy little bed beside the window offers me the kind of soothing comfort that I will never get from other people.
In this room, I find solace in reading great mystery books, listening to my favorite music, sketching some semi-realistic pictures, watching movies, or simply just scrolling through academic aesthetic photos on Pinterest.
In my private space, I find it relaxing and enjoying myself doing my favorite activities.
"and" does not work here. I will try to mimic the structure of the sentence with another example, and you may be able to better spot the issue with this:
In the restaurant, I find it exciting and tasting new foods.
You could also say something like:
...I find it relaxing and I enjoy doing my favorite activities
OR
...I find it relaxing to be enjoying myself doing my favorite activities
Feedback
Clear and descriptive writing with only a few significant issues that I could notice. Nice job, and I hope you find more comfort places!
June 13, 2025
Thank you again for the positive feedback! I really appreciate the thorough explanations you provided for the errors. I’ll definitely work on addressing those in the future.
My comfort place
My life always has been terribly chaotic; in my everyday life, I struggle a lot with schoolwork, house chores, sibling quarrels, socializing with people and friends (I am very bad at communicating with people), time management, and academic pressure, all of which increase the pressure exertplaced upon my headshoulders.
"Placed upon my shoulders" is a common English saying that flows more naturally here. Also, originally, "exerted" didn't make sense for the context
At the present, the only place that keeps me relaxed is my bedroom—my mental sanctuary, my personal space in which I can completely clear away all the depressing thoughts of reality and gain hope for my future.
Even though my space is sometimes messy with books strewn books on the floors and tables, it still creates an inviting atmosphere that welcomes me warmly.
My cozy little bed beside the window offers me the kind of soothing comfort that I will never get from other people.
In this room, I find solace in reading great mystery books, listening to my favorite music, sketching some semi-realistic pictures, watching movies, or simply just scrolling through academic aesthetic photos on Pinterest.
In my private space, I find it relaxing and enjoying myself doing my favorite activities.
June 13, 2025
Thank you so much for your corrections!
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My comfort place This sentence has been marked as perfect! My Titles are usually written in title case, which has special capitalization rules. |
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My life always has been terribly chaotic; in my everyday life, I struggle a lot with schoolwork, house chores, sibling quarrels, socializing with people and friends (I am very bad at communicating with people), time management, and academic pressure, all of which increase the pressure exerted upon my head. My life always has been terribly chaotic; in my everyday life, I struggle a lot with schoolwork, house chores, sibling quarrels, socializing with people and friends (I am very bad at communicating with people), time management, and academic pressure, all of which increase the pressure "Placed upon my shoulders" is a common English saying that flows more naturally here. Also, originally, "exerted" didn't make sense for the context This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At the present, the only place that keep me relaxed is my bedroom—my mental sanctuary, my personal space in which I can completely clear away all the depressing thoughts of reality and gain hope for my future. At At The commonly seen phrase is "at present." People also say "at the present moment." Place is a singular noun, so the verb should be "keeps." |
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Even though my space is sometimes messy with strewn books on the floors and tables, it still creates an inviting atmosphere that welcomes me warmly. Even though my space is sometimes messy with books strewn This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My cozy little bed beside the window offers me the kind of soothing comfort that I will never get from other people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In this room, I find solace in reading great mystery books, listening to my favorite music, sketching some semi-realistic pictures, watching movies, or simply just scrolling through academic aesthetic photos on Pinterest. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In my private space, I find it relaxing and enjoying myself doing my favorite activities. In my private space, I find it relaxing and enjoy In my private space, I find it relaxing "and" does not work here. I will try to mimic the structure of the sentence with another example, and you may be able to better spot the issue with this: In the restaurant, I find it exciting and tasting new foods. You could also say something like: ...I find it relaxing and I enjoy doing my favorite activities OR ...I find it relaxing to be enjoying myself doing my favorite activities |
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Therefore, after a long, energy-drained day, the only thing I long for is a quiet moment to help me reflect and focus on myself and my well-being. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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