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layan2009

Sept. 26, 2025

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My city

.My city is Madinah. It is in the west of Saudi Arabia. It is a holy and modern city.

There are many famous places. There is Al-Masjid An-Nabawi, and there are also historical sites.

Madinah is famous for dates and mint. They are very delicious and healthy.

The population is large. It has more than one million people. Local people are very kind, and many visitors come every year.

I love my city.

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.My city is Madinah.

There is Al-Masjid An-Nabawi is one such place, and there are also historical sites.

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Dates and mint are delicious, and it sounds great to live around so many historical sites. Madinah sounds like a cool city!

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Hi,
I really love Madinah.
I wished to come there but i couldn't come yet.
I wish i could come one day

My city

.My city is Madinah.

It is in theMy city, Madinah, located in west ofern Saudi Arabia, is both holy and modern.

Try to combine some sentences instead of keeping many short sentences. Also, instead of "in the west of Saudi Arabia", it is better to say "western Saudi Arabia."

It is a holy and modern city.

There are many famous places, including the Al-Masjid An-Nabawi, along with many other historical sites.

Once again, don't have very short sentences

There is Al-Masjid An-Nabawi, and there are also historical sites.

Madinah is famous for dates and mint; they are very delicious and healthy.

Here, a semicolon is used because the two sentences can be their own, but they are very small and look better together.

They are very delicious and healthy.

The population is largof Madinah is large, more than one million people.

It has more than one million people.

Local people are very kind, and many visitors come every year.

I love my city.

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Overall, you did a good job with vocabulary and grammar. Just try to focus a bit on sentence structure. It is not an easy concept to learn, so I would recommend reading as much as possible.

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qtcsh

Sept. 26, 2025

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Hi,
I really love Madinah.
I wished to come there but i couldn't come yet.
I wish i could come one day.

My city


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.My city is Madinah.


.My city is Madinah.

.My city is Madinah.

It is in the west of Saudi Arabia.


It is in theMy city, Madinah, located in west ofern Saudi Arabia, is both holy and modern.

Try to combine some sentences instead of keeping many short sentences. Also, instead of "in the west of Saudi Arabia", it is better to say "western Saudi Arabia."

It is a holy and modern city.


It is a holy and modern city.

There are many famous places.


There are many famous places, including the Al-Masjid An-Nabawi, along with many other historical sites.

Once again, don't have very short sentences

There is Al-Masjid An-Nabawi, and there are also historical sites.


There is Al-Masjid An-Nabawi, and there are also historical sites.

There is Al-Masjid An-Nabawi is one such place, and there are also historical sites.

Madinah is famous for dates and mint.


Madinah is famous for dates and mint; they are very delicious and healthy.

Here, a semicolon is used because the two sentences can be their own, but they are very small and look better together.

They are very delicious and healthy.


They are very delicious and healthy.

The population is large.


The population is largof Madinah is large, more than one million people.

It has more than one million people.


It has more than one million people.

Local people are very kind, and many visitors come every year.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I love my city.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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