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My challenge to a difficult movie again

I watched a movie of “Inception” for the second time to try to understand what I couldn’t do when I watched it for the first time. I’m wondering if Christopher Nolan, the director likes to use the idea of extending and shrinking time with gravity or other factors like we saw in “Interstellar “, his another work. After all. I couldn’t figure out all parts of Inception but even more, it makes me want to watch the movie again and again.

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My challenge tof watching a difficult movie again

Might be better to specify an action here (in this case, "watching")

I watched athe movie of “Inception” for thea second time to try to understand what I couldn’t do when I watched it for the first time.

I’m wondering if Christopher Nolan, the director, likes to use the idea of extending and shrinking time with gravity or other factors like we saw in “Interstellar “, his another work.

"Another" is a contraction of "an" and "other". So it can't come after an article like "the" or "a", or a possessive pronoun like "his".

After all.,

I'm pretty sure this is supposed to be part of the next sentence, so it should end with a comma.

I couldn’t figure out all parts ofeverything about Inception, but even more, it makes me want to watch the movie again and again.

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A few mistakes, but otherwise your English is really good! Keep up the good work!

I watched athe movie of “Inception” for the second time to try to understand what I couldn’t do when I watched it for the first time.

I’m wondering if Christopher Nolan, the director likes to, uses the idea of extending and shrinking time with gravity or other factorsime or gravity like we saw in “Interstellar “, his another work.

After all.Eliminate

I couldn’t figure out all parts of Inception,” but even more, it makes me want to watch the movie again and again.

My challenge towatching a difficult movie again

I watched a movie of “called Inception for the second time to try to understand what I couldn’t dounderstand before, when I watched it for the first time.

I’m wondering if Christopher Nolan, the director, likes to use the idea of extending and shrinking time with gravity or other factors like we saw in Interstellar “, his, another work of his.

After all.,

I couldn’t figure out all the parts of Inception but even more, it makes me want to watch the movie again and again.

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Good job!

My challenge to a difficult movie again


My challenge towatching a difficult movie again

My challenge tof watching a difficult movie again

Might be better to specify an action here (in this case, "watching")

I watched a movie of “Inception” for the second time to try to understand what I couldn’t do when I watched it for the first time.


I watched a movie of “called Inception for the second time to try to understand what I couldn’t dounderstand before, when I watched it for the first time.

I watched athe movie of “Inception” for the second time to try to understand what I couldn’t do when I watched it for the first time.

I watched athe movie of “Inception” for thea second time to try to understand what I couldn’t do when I watched it for the first time.

I’m wondering if Christopher Nolan, the director likes to use the idea of extending and shrinking time with gravity or other factors like we saw in “Interstellar “, his another work.


I’m wondering if Christopher Nolan, the director, likes to use the idea of extending and shrinking time with gravity or other factors like we saw in Interstellar “, his, another work of his.

I’m wondering if Christopher Nolan, the director likes to, uses the idea of extending and shrinking time with gravity or other factorsime or gravity like we saw in “Interstellar “, his another work.

I’m wondering if Christopher Nolan, the director, likes to use the idea of extending and shrinking time with gravity or other factors like we saw in “Interstellar “, his another work.

"Another" is a contraction of "an" and "other". So it can't come after an article like "the" or "a", or a possessive pronoun like "his".

After all.


After all.,

After all.Eliminate

After all.,

I'm pretty sure this is supposed to be part of the next sentence, so it should end with a comma.

I couldn’t figure out all parts of Inception but even more, it makes me want to watch the movie again and again.


I couldn’t figure out all the parts of Inception but even more, it makes me want to watch the movie again and again.

I couldn’t figure out all parts of Inception,” but even more, it makes me want to watch the movie again and again.

I couldn’t figure out all parts ofeverything about Inception, but even more, it makes me want to watch the movie again and again.

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