March 13, 2025
Bao vomits frequently about once every two days.
I'm afraid that it may affect his health.
So I searched for lots of relative knowledge and observed him for some time.
I noticed that the time he vomits usually after having a meal.
Previously the former owner gave freeze-dried chicken, cat grass biscuits, and canned cat food as staple food for Bao.
Especially the freeze-dried chicken and cat grass were brought from an individual seller store on Pinduoduo.
(Pinduoduo is just like Amazon which the price of most goods are not very expensive.)
Later I searched for the reason for cat vomit and found that it's not good for cats to eat too varied a diet.
Also, the quality of freeze-dried chicken sold by the individual seller store usually is not good.
Now, I know that cat grass biscuits are not good for cats.
If cats don't feel well they will vomit something like hairballs by having some cat grass instinctively.
Cats don't voluntarily eat cat grass biscuits and even have no idea that there is cat grass in biscuits.
On the contrary, consuming too many cat grass biscuits will lead cats to vomit frequently.
我家的猫(6)-1
小宝经常呕吐,几乎每隔1天就吐一次。
我十分担心这对它的健康会不会造成影响。
因此我上网搜了很多相关的知识,也认真观察了小宝一段时间。
我发现小宝通常呕吐都是在吃完猫粮后不久。
以往前主人给小宝吃的主食是鸡肉冻干、猫草饼干还有猫罐头。
其中鸡肉冻干和猫草饼干是在拼多多的一个私人店铺里面买的。
后来,我上网搜过关于猫呕吐的原因才知道。
猫不能吃得太杂,而且私人店铺的鸡肉冻干通常质量都不怎么好。
另外,我现在才知道原来猫草饼干对猫不好。
因为,如果猫不舒服需要吃猫草它会自己主动吃一些,然后通过呕吐把毛球这些东西吐出来。
但猫草饼干不是猫自己想吃的,猫不知道里面有猫草。猫草饼干吃多了,反而容易导致猫咪经常呕吐。
My Cat (6)-1
Bao vomits frequently about once every two days.
I'm afraid that it may affect his health.
So I searched for lots of relative knowledge and observed him for some time.
I noticed that the time he vomits usually vomits after having a meal.
“The time” is not needed here. I also put “usually” in a place that sounds more natural, but your original sentence is correct.
Previously, the former owner gave freeze-dried chicken, cat grass biscuits, and canned cat food as staple food for Bao.
Especially the freeze-dried chicken and cat grass were brought from an individual seller store on Pinduoduo.
“Especially” doesn’t really make sense in this context. Especially is kind of used to highlight a certain quality.
Ex: The food for Bao is not that reliable, especially the freeze-dried chicken and cat grass which were bought from an individual seller store on Pinduoduo.
(Pinduoduo is just like Amazon whichere the price of most goods are not very expensive.)
Later I searched for the reason fors that cats vomit and found that it's not good for cats to eat too varied of a diet.
Also, the quality of freeze-dried chicken sold by the individual seller stores is usually is not good.
This sounds more natural. I would only say “sold by the individual seller store” if you’re talking about the specific one you buy Bao’s food from, but it sounds like you are talking about individual sellers as a whole.
Now, I know that cat grass biscuits are not good for cats.
If cats don't feel well they will vomit something like hairballs by having some cat grass instinctively.
Im not exactly sure what this sentence means. It sounds like they will instinctively eat cat grass to make themselves vomit to me. I think you are trying to say “If cats don’t feel well after eating cat grass, they will instinctively vomit something like hairballs.”
Cats don't voluntarily eat cat grass biscuits and even have no idea that there is cat grass in biscuits.
On the contrary, consuming too many cat grass biscuits will lead cats to vomit frequently.
It kinda doesn’t make sense to say “on the contrary” here because the whole text supports the idea that cat grass will make cats vomit.
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Good job! I hope you find a good diet for your cat!
My Cat (6)-1
Bao vomits frequently about once every two days.
I'm afraid that it may affect his health.
So I searched fora lots of relative knowledge for relevant information and observed him for some time.
'relevant' rather than 'relative'. I would say 'information' not 'knowledge'. 'knowledge' is not really correct here.
I noticed, that the time he vomits usually vomits is after having a meal.
Previously the former owner gaHis former owner had previously given freeze-dried chicken, cat grass biscuits, and canned cat food as staple food for Bao.
Especially the freeze-dried chicken and cat grass, which were brought from an individual seller store on Pinduoduo.
Need a relative pronoun needed to link the two clauses together.
(Pinduoduo is just like Amazon whichere the price of most goods are not very expensive.)
Virtual location use 'where'.
Later I searched for the reason for a cat vomiting and found that it's not good for cats to eat too varied a diet.
'cat vomit' would be a noun phrase and is a thing not an action.
Also, the quality of freeze-dried chicken sold by the individual seller store is usually is not good.
Now, I know that cat grass biscuits are not good for cats.
If cats don't feel well, they will vomit up something like hairballs by havinstinctively eating some cat grass instinctively.
Cats don't voluntarily eat cat grass biscuits and even have no idea that there is cat grass in biscuits.
On the contrary, consuming too many cat grass biscuits will lead to cats to vomiting frequently.
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Good work.
I noticed that the time he vomits usually vomits is after having a meal.
I added the word, "is."
I also moved the word "usually" to modify "vomits" rather than "after having a meal." "Usually" means it happens a lot but not every time. I'm assuming that Bao does not vomit every time he eats.
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You are doing an amazing job! Your English is very good.
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Also, the quality of freeze-dried chicken sold by the individual seller store usually is not good. Also, the quality of freeze-dried chicken sold by the individual seller store is usually Also, the quality of freeze-dried chicken sold by This sounds more natural. I would only say “sold by the individual seller store” if you’re talking about the specific one you buy Bao’s food from, but it sounds like you are talking about individual sellers as a whole. |
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