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April 15, 2025

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My Career

I suddenly realized that it has already been forty years since I started working. Knowing that, I am a little scared.

I was born and raised in a small village, in a farmer’s family. When I was fifteen years old, I was admitted to study in a specialized technical secondary school because of my good performance in the graduation exam, which meant I would be allocated a job by the government when I finished my studies in that secondary school.

My major was agricultural machinery management. After graduation, I was assigned a job in an agricultural machinery training center in a county, which was about 200 kilometers from my hometown.

I worked there for four years. In mid - April 1989, I was transferred to the city where I had studied, which was also the city my hometown belonged to, and I worked in the same department as the first one.

I worked in that department for eight years. In the summer of 1997, I was transferred to a department in the same city, which was responsible for promoting new agricultural machinery.

I worked in this department for 19 years. In the summer of 2016, I was transferred back to my second department. I worked in this department for four years this time.

In June 2020, I was transferred to my current department, which focused on training farmers in my district.

When I started working, I was eighteen years old, but now, I am already fifty - eight years old. Time flies; I feel like it’s only a blink from eighteen to fifty - eight.

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My Career

I suddenly realized that it has already been forty years since I started working.

Knowing that, I am a little scared.

I was born and raised in a small village, in a farmer’s family.

When I was fifteen years old, I was admitted to study in a specialized technical secondary school because of my good performance in the graduation exam, which meant I would be allocated a job by the government when I finished my studies in that secondary school.

My major was agricultural machinery management.

After graduation, I was assigned a job in an agricultural machinery training center in a county, which was about 200 kilometers from my hometown.

I worked there for four years.

In mid - April 1989, I was transferred to the city where I had studied, which was also the city my hometown belonged to, and I worked in the same department as thein my first onejob.

I would just say that it was 'my hometown' here. I have put in 'in my first job' to emphasise that.

I worked in that department for eight years.

In the summer of 1997, I was transferred to a department in the same city, which was responsible for promoting new agricultural machinery.

I worked in this department for 19 years.

In the summer of 2016, I was transferred back to my second department.

I worked in this department for four years this time.

In June 2020, I was transferred to my current department, which focused on training farmers in my district.

When I started working, I was eighteen years old, but now, I am already fifty - eight years old.

Time flies; I feel like it’s only a blink from eighteen to fifty - eight.

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Jack

April 15, 2025

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My Career

I suddenly realized that it has already been forty years since I started working.

Knowing that, I am a little scared.

I was born and raised in a small village, in a farmer’s family.

When I was fifteen years old, I was admitted to study in a specialized technical secondary school because of my good performance in the graduation exam, which meant I would be allocated a job by the government when I finished my studies in that secondary school.

My major was agricultural machinery management.

After graduation, I was assigned a job in an agricultural machinery training center in a county, which was about 200 kilometers from my hometown.

I worked there for four years.

In mid - April 1989, I was transferred to the city where I had studied, which was also the city my hometown belonged to, and I worked in the same department as the first one.

I worked in that department for eight years.

In the summer of 1997, I was transferred to a department in the same city, which was responsible for promoting new agricultural machinery.

I worked in this department for 19 years.

In the summer of 2016, I was transferred back to my second department.

I worked in this department for four years this time.

In June 2020, I was transferred to my current department, which focused on training farmers in my district.

When I started working, I was eighteen years old, but now, I am already fifty - eight years old.

Time flies; I feel like it’s only a blink from eighteen to fifty - eight.

Jack's avatar
Jack

April 15, 2025

4

Thank you very much.

I suddenly realized that it has already been forty years since I started working.!

Knowing thatis, I am a little scared.

I was born and raised in a small village, into a farmer’s family.

When I was fifteen years old, I was admitted to study in a specialized technical secondary school because of my good performance ion the graduation exam, which meant I would be allocated. I was given a job byin the government when I finished my studies in that secondary school.

After graduation, I was assigned a job in an agricultural machinery training center in a county, which was about 200 kilometers from my hometown.

In mid - -April 1989, I was transferred to the city where I had studied, which was also the city my hometown belonged to, and. I worked in the same department as the first one.

I worked in this department for four years this time.

In June 2020, I was transferred to my current department, which is focused on training farmers in my district.

When I started working, I was eighteen years old, butand now, I am already fifty - -eight years old.

Time flies;! I feel like it’s only a blink from eighteen to fifty - -eight.

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Jack

April 15, 2025

4

Thank you very much.

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I was born and raised in a small village, in a farmer’s family.


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When I was fifteen years old, I was admitted to study in a specialized technical secondary school because of my good performance in the graduation exam, which meant I would be allocated a job by the government when I finished my studies in that secondary school.


When I was fifteen years old, I was admitted to study in a specialized technical secondary school because of my good performance ion the graduation exam, which meant I would be allocated. I was given a job byin the government when I finished my studies in that secondary school.

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In mid - April 1989, I was transferred to the city where I had studied, which was also the city my hometown belonged to, and I worked in the same department as the first one.


In mid - -April 1989, I was transferred to the city where I had studied, which was also the city my hometown belonged to, and. I worked in the same department as the first one.

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In mid - April 1989, I was transferred to the city where I had studied, which was also the city my hometown belonged to, and I worked in the same department as thein my first onejob.

I would just say that it was 'my hometown' here. I have put in 'in my first job' to emphasise that.

I worked in that department for eight years.


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In the summer of 1997, I was transferred to a department in the same city, which was responsible for promoting new agricultural machinery.


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In June 2020, I was transferred to my current department, which focused on training farmers in my district.


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When I started working, I was eighteen years old, but now, I am already fifty - eight years old.


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Time flies; I feel like it’s only a blink from eighteen to fifty - eight.


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After graduation, I was assigned a job in an agricultural machinery training center in a county, which was about 200 kilometers from my hometown.


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