May 20, 2021
My body is in a puzzle by mixed recent weather
In Japan, from around May, it has already gotten hotter than regular years despite before arrival of full-fledged summer. Although I bore it first, but I had to no choice but to change that stance without air conditioner when the mercury hit the record-breaking 30 Celsius degrees or more. But as I has used it, at the same time, in many these days, it has continued to rain so I cannot go out even more often than already self-restricted mindset to go out because of coronavirus pandemic, and so that because the rain cools down some temperature, the outcome of daily or hourly temperature is quite at random, then I was aware at one time, strangely to say, that I used electric heater just after using air conditioner. As the room turned hot, cool, and hot, it turns out that I switched air conditioner on, electric heater on, and again air conditioner on even at the same day. What the crazy behavior this is!
My sentence is not good.
I am sorry for everyone to read me.
Thank you.
My body is in a puzzle by mixedthe recent mixed weather
In Japan, from around May, it has already gotten hotter than regular years despite. This is despite it being before the arrival of full-fledged summer.
Although I bore it at first, but I had to no choice but to change thate stance of being without an air conditioner when the mercury hit thea record-breaking 30 Celsius degrees or more.
But as I hasve used it, at the same time, in many these many days, it has continued to rain s. So I cannot go out, even more often than the already self-restricted mindset, to go out because of the coronavirus pandemic, and so that b. Because the rain cools down somthe temperature to some degree, the outcome ofis daily or hourly temperature is quite at random, then. I was aware at one time, that strangely to say, that II had used the electric heater just after using the air conditioner.
This sentence is too long. Sentences are usually no longer than 25 words in English.
I would also change the paragraph here as you have switched to a new topic.
As the room turned hot, coold, and hot, it turns out that I switched the air conditioner on, the electric heater on, and again the air conditioner on even aton the same day.
What thekind of crazy behaviour this this!
My sentence iss are not good.
Thank you.
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Hi, I think you're really good at getting the information written down. Just try to practice keeping things short and clear. It's much better to add another sentence or paragraph instead of having long run-on sentences.
Best of luck with your learning! 😄
May 20, 2021
Thank you for correcting me.
These orders are difficult, aren't these. <<< the recent mixed weather, in these many days
I wonder if there is any rule around it.
In addition, It is also difficult to decide a grammatically suitable article such as the definite one, the indefinite one or zero one.
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My body is in a puzzle by mixed recent weather My body is in a puzzle by |
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In Japan, from around May, it has already gotten hotter than regular years despite before arrival of full-fledged summer. In Japan, from around May, it has already gotten hotter than regular years |
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Although I bore it first, but I had to no choice but to change that stance without air conditioner. |
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But as I has used it, at the same time, in many these days, it has continued to rain so I cannot go out even more often than already self-restricted mindset to go out because of coronavirus pandemic, and so that because the rain cools down some temperature, the outcome of daily or hourly temperature is quite at random, then I was aware at one time, strangely to say, that I used electric heater just after using air conditioner. But as I ha This sentence is too long. Sentences are usually no longer than 25 words in English. I would also change the paragraph here as you have switched to a new topic. |
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As the room turned hot, cool, and hot, it turns out that I switched air conditioner on, electric heater on, and again air conditioner on even at the same day. As the room turned hot, co |
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What the crazy behavior this is! What |
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My sentence is not good. My sentence |
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I am sorry for everyone to read me. |
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Although I bore it first, but I had to no choice but to change that stance without air conditioner when the mercury hit the record-breaking 30 Celsius degrees or more. Although I bore it at first, |
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