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sachisachi

June 17, 2025

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My Bike Ride (126)

I go for a bike ride for my exercise every day except rainy days.

I used to go after lunch, but I've changed the time for it.

Now I go around five pm because it's been getting really hot during day time.

I've also changed the route because the path I used to go through has been bushy.

The grass has been growing and covering the path.

I thought I might come across snakes or other creepy bugs.

That's why I changed the route.

Now I ride my bike for an hour, which is 30 minutes longer than I did before.

The sun is still up in the sky even around five pm, so I wear arm cavers to avoid getting suntan.

However, I think I'll still get sun tan, but it's okay because getting a little bit of sun tan is good to stay healthy.


私は、雨の日以外、毎日運動のために自転車に乗ります。

以前はランチの後に行っていましたが、行く時間を変えました。

最近すごく暑くなってきたので、今は、だいたい夕方5時ころ行きます。

そして、以前通っていた道に草が生い茂ってきたので、私は、ルートも変えました。

草がすごく生い茂ってきて、道におおいかぶさるようになっています。

私は、蛇とか気持ち悪い虫に出くわすかもしれないと思いました。

だからルートも変えました。

今は一時間自転車に乗ります。それは前より30分も長いです。

夕方の5時でもまだ太陽がかなり高い位置にあるからアームカバーで日焼けを防ぎます。

それでも、少しは日に焼けると思いますが、健康のため少しくらいの日焼けはまあいいかな。

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My Bike Ride (126)

I go for a bike ride for myto exercise every day except rainy dayfor days that it rains.

I used to go after lunch, but I've changed the time for it.switched to going around 5 PM because it's been getting really hot during the daytime.

Would combine the 2 sentences!

Now I go around five pm because it's been getting really hot during day time.

I've also changed the route I've been taking, because the path I used to go through has been bushy.

The gGrass has been growing and covering the path.

I thought I might come across snakes or other creepy bugs, which is why I changed the route.

Just combining the sentences here again :) not wrong just sounds more natural

That's why I changed the route.

Now I ride my bike for an hour, which is 30 minutes longer than I did before.

The sun is still up in the sky even around five pm, so I wear arm caovers to avoid getting suntanned.

However, I think I'll probably still get sun tantanned even if I do, but it's okay because getting a little bit of sun tanned is good to stay healthy.

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sachisachi

July 3, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

I go for a bike ridebicycle around for my exercise every day, except rainy daywhen it rains.

Me too!

I used to go after lunch, but I've changed sometimes other time for its.

Now I tend to go around five p.m .because it's been getting really hot during day timemidday.

I've also changed the route because the path I used to go through has been bushyo a shady route to avoid the sunlight.

ThSome grass has been growing and is covering theat path.

I thought I might come across snakes or other creepy bugs.

That's why I changed the route.

Now I ride my bike for an hour, which is 30 minutes longer than I did before.

The sun is still up in the sky even around five pm, so I wear arm cavers to avoid getting a suntan.

However, I think I'll still get sun tan, but it's okay because getting a little bit of sun tan is good to stay healthy.

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I usually bicycle an hour a day in Shizuoka, unless it is raining. I use a e-bike, which is nice when going up steep hills.

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sachisachi

June 17, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections! E-bike sounds good!

My Bike Ride

I go for a bike ride for my exercise every day except rainy days.

I used to go after lunch, but I've changed the time for it.

Now I go around five pm because it's been getting really hot during day time.

I've also changed the route because the path I used to go through has been bushy (or has become/gotten bushy).

The grass has been growing and covering the path.

I thought I might come across snakes or other creepy bugs.

That's why I changed the route.

Now I ride my bike for an hour, which is 30 minutes longer than I did before.

The sun is still up in the sky even around five pm, so I wear arm caovers to avoid getting suntan (or sunburn).

However, I think I'll still get sun tan, but it's okay because getting a little bit of sun tan is good to stay healthy.

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sachisachi

June 17, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

I go for a bike ride for (my) exercise every day except on rainy days.

You can omit "my" here and I think it sounds better.

I used to go after lunch, but I've changed the time for it.

Now I go around five pm because it's been getting really hot during day time.

We usually only use "pm" when combining it with numeric numbers (e.g. 5pm). If you spell it out as "five", normally people write e.g. "five in the evening" if they need to specify which 5.

I've also changed the route because the path I used to go through has becomen bushy.

The grass has been growing and is now covering the path.

"has been growing" is a statement about the activities of the grass so far (like 咲いていた)while covering is a statement about what it's doing now (like 覆っている)which means you need to bring back in the "is now".

The sun is still up in the sky even around five pm, so I wear arm caovers to avoid getting a suntan.

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I've had to put my cycling on hold for a bit because it's warm here. Being Irish I don't tan, I just get sunburn very easily. Also it's the time of year where there's a lot of pollen so my pollen allergies have been a problem :(

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sachisachi

June 18, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections! I've never been to Ireland, but it looks so beautiful. I hope I can visit there one day. I also found out it's cold there. I googled and found out the temperature was 14 degrees Celsius. Now the temperature over here in Japan is 30 degrees Celsius. It's to hot to go out.

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araigoshi

June 18, 2025

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Don't forget the time difference :) Guessing you saw 14C in the morning here. It's like 21-22C later in the day at the moment. Might not be hot by Japanese standards, but we're less used to heat here ;)

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sachisachi

June 19, 2025

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Oh, right. Maybe I saw the morning temperature. 21 C sounds perfect to me!

My Bike Ride

I go for a bike ride for myas exercise every day except on rainy days.

I used to go after lunch, but I've changed the time for itI go.

I would say "I used to go after lunch, but now I go later. I go around 5pm now because it's been getting really hot during the day."

Now I go around five pm because it's been getting really hot during the day time.

I've also changed themy route because the path I used to go through has becomen bushy.

I think "my route" sounds more natural than just "the route"

The grass has been growing and (now) coverings the path.

I thought I might come across snakes or other creepy bugs.

It may be more natural to say "I was worried I might come across snakes or other creepy bugs"

That's why I changed themy route.

Now I ride my bike for an hour, which is 30 minutes longer than I did before.

The sun is still up in the sky even around five pm, so I wear arm caovers to avoid getting a suntan.

However, I think I'll still get a sun tan, but it's okay because getting a little bit of a sun tan is a good way to stay healthy.

"Sun tan" is ok, but I think it's more common to use "suntan" (as one word). Using "however" and "but" in the same sentence here sounds odd, so I removed the "however", as I don't think you need that word here.

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sachisachi

June 17, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections! I appreciate your help!

My Bike Ride

I go for a bike ride for myas exercise every day except rainy dayones.

Can replace 'days' with 'ones' which refers backs to the earler 'day'.

I used to go after lunch, but I've changed the time for itI go.

Now I go around five pm because it's been getting really hot during day timethe day.

I've also changed the route because the path I used to go through has been bushycome overgrown.

The grass has been growingn and coveringed the path.

I thought I might come across snakes or other creepy bugs.

That's why I changed the route.

Now I ride my bike for an hour, which is 30 minutes longer than I did before.

The sun is still up in the sky even around five pm, so I wear arm caovers to avoid getting a suntan.

However, I think I'll still get a sun tan, but it's okay because getting a little bit of a sun tan is good tofor staying healthy.

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Good work. Just minor changes only needed to be made.

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sachisachi

June 17, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

I used to go after lunch, but I've changed the time for it.


I used to go after lunch, but I've changed the time for itI go.

I used to go after lunch, but I've changed the time for itI go.

I would say "I used to go after lunch, but now I go later. I go around 5pm now because it's been getting really hot during the day."

I used to go after lunch, but I've changed the time for it.

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I used to go after lunch, but I've changed sometimes other time for its.

I used to go after lunch, but I've changed the time for it.switched to going around 5 PM because it's been getting really hot during the daytime.

Would combine the 2 sentences!

Now I ride my bike for an hour, which is 30 minutes longer than I did before.


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The sun is still up in the sky even around five pm, so I wear arm cavers to avoid getting suntan.


The sun is still up in the sky even around five pm, so I wear arm caovers to avoid getting a suntan.

The sun is still up in the sky even around five pm, so I wear arm caovers to avoid getting a suntan.

The sun is still up in the sky even around five pm, so I wear arm caovers to avoid getting a suntan.

The sun is still up in the sky even around five pm, so I wear arm caovers to avoid getting suntan (or sunburn).

The sun is still up in the sky even around five pm, so I wear arm cavers to avoid getting a suntan.

The sun is still up in the sky even around five pm, so I wear arm caovers to avoid getting suntanned.

My Bike Ride


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The grass has been growing and covering the path.


The grass has been growingn and coveringed the path.

The grass has been growing and (now) coverings the path.

The grass has been growing and is now covering the path.

"has been growing" is a statement about the activities of the grass so far (like 咲いていた)while covering is a statement about what it's doing now (like 覆っている)which means you need to bring back in the "is now".

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

ThSome grass has been growing and is covering theat path.

The gGrass has been growing and covering the path.

My Bike Ride (126)


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I go for a bike ride for my exercise every day except rainy days.


I go for a bike ride for myas exercise every day except rainy dayones.

Can replace 'days' with 'ones' which refers backs to the earler 'day'.

I go for a bike ride for myas exercise every day except on rainy days.

I go for a bike ride for (my) exercise every day except on rainy days.

You can omit "my" here and I think it sounds better.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I go for a bike ridebicycle around for my exercise every day, except rainy daywhen it rains.

Me too!

I go for a bike ride for myto exercise every day except rainy dayfor days that it rains.

Now I go around five pm because it's been getting really hot during day time.


Now I go around five pm because it's been getting really hot during day timethe day.

Now I go around five pm because it's been getting really hot during the day time.

Now I go around five pm because it's been getting really hot during day time.

We usually only use "pm" when combining it with numeric numbers (e.g. 5pm). If you spell it out as "five", normally people write e.g. "five in the evening" if they need to specify which 5.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now I tend to go around five p.m .because it's been getting really hot during day timemidday.

Now I go around five pm because it's been getting really hot during day time.

I've also changed the route because the path I used to go through has been bushy.


I've also changed the route because the path I used to go through has been bushycome overgrown.

I've also changed themy route because the path I used to go through has becomen bushy.

I think "my route" sounds more natural than just "the route"

I've also changed the route because the path I used to go through has becomen bushy.

I've also changed the route because the path I used to go through has been bushy (or has become/gotten bushy).

I've also changed the route because the path I used to go through has been bushyo a shady route to avoid the sunlight.

I've also changed the route I've been taking, because the path I used to go through has been bushy.

I thought I might come across snakes or other creepy bugs.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I thought I might come across snakes or other creepy bugs.

It may be more natural to say "I was worried I might come across snakes or other creepy bugs"

I thought I might come across snakes or other creepy bugs.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I thought I might come across snakes or other creepy bugs, which is why I changed the route.

Just combining the sentences here again :) not wrong just sounds more natural

That's why I changed the route.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That's why I changed themy route.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That's why I changed the route.

However, I think I'll still get sun tan, but it's okay because getting a little bit of sun tan is good to stay healthy.


However, I think I'll still get a sun tan, but it's okay because getting a little bit of a sun tan is good tofor staying healthy.

However, I think I'll still get a sun tan, but it's okay because getting a little bit of a sun tan is a good way to stay healthy.

"Sun tan" is ok, but I think it's more common to use "suntan" (as one word). Using "however" and "but" in the same sentence here sounds odd, so I removed the "however", as I don't think you need that word here.

However, I think I'll still get sun tan, but it's okay because getting a little bit of sun tan is good to stay healthy.

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However, I think I'll probably still get sun tantanned even if I do, but it's okay because getting a little bit of sun tanned is good to stay healthy.

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