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SummerTeaWater

April 11, 2021

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My bicycles

I currently have two bicycles for my habit and commuting.
I really like these two bicycle too much.

The first one is a folding bike that is for commuting on weekdays.
My office is 2 kilometers away from my house, so it is good to ride the bike.
Sometimes I can arrive my office earlier than when I take a bus.
It is because the bike can go the shortest path by alleies.

The other is a road bike that I take it when I go to journey or work out.
My average speed with the road bike is 25 kilometers per hour, so it is good to go to the Han river in Seoul.
After reaching the river by the bike, I usually drink a beer at a convinent store where I can enjoy a good scenery near the river.
Pleasant breeze is also good things, why I go to journey by bicycle as well.

I totally recommend to use a bicycle for your enjoyment.

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My bicycles’s

‘s to show possession. This added to show it’s your property.

I currently have two bicycles for my habit and commuting’s.One for home and one to commute to work.

I really like these two bicyclemy bicycle’s a lot sometimes too much.!

The first one is a folding bike that is for commuting on weekdays.

The first one is a folding bike that I ride to work during the weekday.
Or
The first one is a folding a bike that I use to commute to work during the weekdays.

My office is 2 kilometers away from my house, so it is good to ride the bike.

This is good too. Or you can say . My office is 2 kilometers away from my house, so its easier to ride my bike to work.

Sometimes I can arrive at my office earlier than when I take a bus.I would have if I had taken the bus instead. ¶

It is because the bike can goI take the shortest path bywhich are the alleieys.

Plural for Alley is Alleys

The other one is a road bike that I take it when I want go to on a journey or to work out.

My average speed withon the road bike is 25 kilometers per hour, so it is good to go toride it by the Han river in Seoul.

After reaching the river by the bike, I usually drinkbuy a beer at a convinent store where I can enjoy a goodfrom the convenience store. Then I enjoy the beautiful scenery nearof the river.

Pleasant breeze is also good things,another reason. why I go to journeyride by bicycle as well.

I totally recommend to useriding a bicycle for your enjoymentand to enjoy the scenery along thr way.

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Your English is very good. Very little mistakes. I think you could pass for a native speaker.

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SummerTeaWater

April 12, 2021

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Thank you very very much! You are the light of my study :)

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Archiekinz

April 12, 2021

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You’re welcome!!! I always appreciate your help as well!!!

My bicycles


My bicycles’s

‘s to show possession. This added to show it’s your property.

I currently have two bicycles for my habit and commuting.


I currently have two bicycles for my habit and commuting’s.One for home and one to commute to work.

I really like these two bicycle too much.


I really like these two bicyclemy bicycle’s a lot sometimes too much.!

The first one is a folding bike that is for commuting on weekdays.


The first one is a folding bike that is for commuting on weekdays.

The first one is a folding bike that I ride to work during the weekday. Or The first one is a folding a bike that I use to commute to work during the weekdays.

My office is 2 kilometers away from my house, so it is good to ride the bike.


My office is 2 kilometers away from my house, so it is good to ride the bike.

This is good too. Or you can say . My office is 2 kilometers away from my house, so its easier to ride my bike to work.

Sometimes I can arrive my office earlier than when I take a bus.


Sometimes I can arrive at my office earlier than when I take a bus.I would have if I had taken the bus instead. ¶

It is because the bike can go the shortest path by alleies.


It is because the bike can goI take the shortest path bywhich are the alleieys.

Plural for Alley is Alleys

The other is a road bike that I take it when I go to journey or work out.


The other one is a road bike that I take it when I want go to on a journey or to work out.

My average speed with the road bike is 25 kilometers per hour, so it is good to go to the Han river in Seoul.


My average speed withon the road bike is 25 kilometers per hour, so it is good to go toride it by the Han river in Seoul.

After reaching the river by the bike, I usually drink a beer at a convinent store where I can enjoy a good scenery near the river.


After reaching the river by the bike, I usually drinkbuy a beer at a convinent store where I can enjoy a goodfrom the convenience store. Then I enjoy the beautiful scenery nearof the river.

Pleasant breeze is also good things, why I go to journey by bicycle as well.


Pleasant breeze is also good things,another reason. why I go to journeyride by bicycle as well.

I totally recommend to use a bicycle for your enjoyment.


I totally recommend to useriding a bicycle for your enjoymentand to enjoy the scenery along thr way.

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