June 10, 2025
My best friend.
Today I decided to practice my English in a different way.
I would like to use this website not only for improving my English but for get things off my chest by telling some of my stories.
I will start with an story that is recent.
I used to have a friend who was very close to me like my "best friend". He would come over to my place and stay all afternoon.
We often argued, I don't know why.
The last time We argued was the final straw.
He had said he had a present for my last happy birthday: It was two tickets to see SOAD live. I was really excited because it had been my favorite band since I was a kid. This band was with me during the hardest times of my youth. I started getting ready for the show. I asked for permission at work to go, it was really difficult, but in the end, I got it.
Two days before the concert, we had an argument. I was annoyed because I always had to be the one to ask for him to spend time together, and that's something that had always bothered me. So, I asked him to play a LoL match, and he said no: "I already made plans with someone else. When I'm done, we could play something". I got very upset, so I started another argument where I told him how I felt and reproached him for not asking me to play.
He took that in the wrong way, so he didn't say anything.
Afterwards, I realized I shouldn't have said it. I decided to apologize to him, but at the concert.
The thing is, the concert never happened.
The day before the concert, I wrote to him but he never replied. On the day of the concert day, I called him, but he didn't answer either. I was worried, not because I missed the concert, but because of our friendship and what it meant to me.
As I feared, he did something very deeply hurtful and betraying.
Some time ago, there was a girl that hated me, she used to make rude comments and speak badly about me. My friend also dislike her and would often speak badly about her too. He made it clear he didn't like her at all.
But he went to the concert with her.
Then, he posted a photo with her and wrote: "with my best friend". That's the only photo in his profile.
We had been friends for seven years.
I would like to use this website not only for improving my English but also for getting things off my chest by telling some of my stories.
I will start with an story that is recent story.
This sounds more natural and shortens the sentence.
I used to have a friend who was very close to me like, he was my "best friend".
The last time Wwe argued was the final straw.
He had said he had a present for my last happy birthday: It was two tickets to see SOAD live.
So, I asked him to play a LoL match, and he said no: ""No, I already made plans with someone else".
When I'm done, we couldan play something".
He took that in the wrong way, so he didn't say anything.
My friend also disliked her and would often speak badly about her too.
My best friend.
Today I decided to practice my English in a different way.
I would like to use this website not only for improving my English but for get things off my chest by telling some of my stories.
I will start with an story that is recent.
I used to have a friend who was very close to me. They were like my "best friend".
Your version is fine when speaking.
We often argued,. I don't know why.
The last time Wwe argued was the final straw.
He had said he had a present for my last happy birthday: Iit was two tickets to see SOAD live.
This can be correct if you mean that you won't have another happy birthday ever again.
I was really excited because ithey hadve been my favorite band since I was a kid.
"they had" kind of sounds like they aren't your favorite band anymore or you forgot about them.
This band was with me during the hardest times of my youth.
I started getting ready for the show.
I asked for permission at work to go, i. It was really difficult, but in the end, I got it.
I was annoyed because I've always had to been the one to ask for him to spend time together, and that's something that had's always bothered me.
He took ithat in the wrong way, so he and didn't say anything.
Afterwards, I realized I shouldn't have said it.
I decided to apologize to him, but at the concert.
The thing is, the concert never happened.
The day before the concert, I wrote to him but he never replied.
On the day of the concert day, I called him, but he didn't answer either.
I was worried, not because I missed the concert, but because of our friendship and what it meant to me.
As I feared, he did something very deeply hurtful and betraying.
Some time ago, there was a girl that hated me, she used to make rude comments and speak badly about me.
My friend also disliked her and would often speak badly about her too.
He made it clear he didn't like her at all.
But he went to the concert with her.
Then, he posted a photo with her and wrote: "with my best friend".
That's the only photo in his profile.
We had been friends for seven years.
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I asked for permission at work to go, it was really difficult, but in the end, I got it. I asked for permission at work to go |
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Two days before the concert, we had an argument. |
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I was annoyed because I always had to be the one to ask for him to spend time together, and that's something that had always bothered me. I was annoyed because I've always |
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So, I asked him to play a LoL match, and he said no: "I already made plans with someone else. So, I asked him to play a LoL match, and he said |
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When I'm done, we could play something". When I'm done, we c |
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I got very upset, so I started another argument where I told him how I felt and reproached him for not asking me to play. |
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My friend also dislike her and would often speak badly about her too. My friend also disliked her and would often speak badly about her too. My friend also disliked her and would often speak badly about her too. |
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He made it clear he didn't like her at all. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But he went to the concert with her. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then, he posted a photo with her and wrote: "with my best friend". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That's the only photo in his profile. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We had been friends for seven years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On the day of the concert day, I called him, but he didn't answer either. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was worried, not because I missed the concert, but because of our friendship and what it meant to me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As I feared, he did something very deeply hurtful and betraying. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He took that in the wrong way, so he didn't say anything. He took it He took that |
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Afterwards, I realized I shouldn't have said it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I decided to apologize to him, but at the concert. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The thing is, the concert never happened. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some time ago, there was a girl that hated me, she used to make rude comments and speak badly about me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The day before the concert, I wrote to him but he never replied. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My best friend. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today I decided to practice my English in a different way. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I would like to use this website not only for improving my English but for get things off my chest by telling some of my stories. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I would like to use this website not only for improving my English but also for getting things off my chest by telling some of my stories. |
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I used to have a friend who was very close to me like my "best friend". I used to have a friend who was very close to me. They were like my "best friend". Your version is fine when speaking. I used to have a friend who was very close to me |
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He would come over to my place and stay all afternoon. |
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We often argued, I don't know why. We often argued |
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The last time We argued was the final straw. The last time The last time |
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He had said he had a present for my last happy birthday: It was two tickets to see SOAD live. He had said he had a present for my last happy birthday: This can be correct if you mean that you won't have another happy birthday ever again. He had said he had a present for my |
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I was really excited because it had been my favorite band since I was a kid. I was really excited because "they had" kind of sounds like they aren't your favorite band anymore or you forgot about them. |
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This band was with me during the hardest times of my youth. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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