May 7, 2021
My beloved dog.
Last September, I lost my lovely dog. He would be18 years old, leaving just 2 months. He was only 2months old and a protected dog
when I got him from the center. As soon as I arrived there ,many people were coming from various places. We drew lots for turns.
Unfortunately mine was almost the bottom. However the dog I wanted most was still there. People assumed he would be a big because of his stout legs. Thanks to that I finally could hold him tightly.
私の愛しい犬。
去年の九月、かわいい犬がなくなりました。あと2か月で18歳でした。彼は保護犬でセンターに行くと多くの人がいろいろなとこから来ていました。私達は貰う順番をきめるくじを引きましたが残念なことにびりに近いものでした。でも私が一番欲しかった子がまだ残っていたのです。
足が大きくて大型犬に成長すると思われたようです。お陰で彼をしっかりと抱きしめることができたのです。
My beloved dog.
Last September, I lost my lovely dog.
He would be18 years old, leaving just 2 monthswas two months from turning 18.
I'm guessing you meant that he was 17 years and 10 months old, but it's hard to tell.
He was only 2months old and a protected dogI adopted him from an animal shelter when he was two months old.
when I got him from the center.
Looks like your sentence got split in two.
As soon as I arrived there , many other people were coming from various placescame.
We drew lots for turnto decide turns for picking out dogs.
Unfortunately, mine was almost at the bottom.
However, the dog I wanted most was still there.
People assumed he would be a big because of his stout legs, and so did not want him.
I edited this with what I think you meant.
Thanks to that I could finally could hold him tightly.
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私は去年１８歳猫がなくなりました。私も悲しいです。
May 8, 2021
I appreciate for your appropriate corrections. Thank you so much and I wish you will continue to support me.
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My beloved dog. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Last September, I lost my lovely dog. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He would be18 years old, leaving just 2 months. He I'm guessing you meant that he was 17 years and 10 months old, but it's hard to tell. |
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He was only 2months old and a protected dog
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when I got him from the center.
Looks like your sentence got split in two. |
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As soon as I arrived there ,many people were coming from various places. As soon as I arrived there |
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We drew lots for turns. We drew lots |
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Unfortunately mine was almost the bottom. Unfortunately, mine was almost at the bottom. |
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However the dog I wanted most was still there. However, the dog I wanted most was still there. |
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People assumed he would be a big because of his stout legs. People assumed he would be a big because of his stout legs, and so did not want him. I edited this with what I think you meant. |
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Thanks to that I finally could hold him tightly. Thanks to that I could finally |
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