June 2, 2025
My a day
I came back at home after school.
I take a bath
It is very relax.
I played game after dinner.
This is my good a day.
私は学校の後、家に帰ります。
私はお風呂に入ります。
それはすごくリラックスできる。
夜ご飯の後、私はゲームをします。
これが私の良い一日です。
My a day
I came back at home after school.
We say "came home" rather than "came back at home." The preposition "at" is incorrect in this context. "Come home" is the natural phrase.
I takeook a bath
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It iwas very relaxing.
Since this happened in the past, we use the past tense "took" instead of the present tense "take."
"Relax" is a verb, but here we need an adjective to describe the bath. So, "relaxing" is the correct form. We also use "was" to match past tense.
I played a game after dinner.
"Game" is a countable noun, so we need an article: "a game."
This is myIt was a good a day.
"This is my good a day" is incorrect in both word order and article use. The correct sentence is "It was a good day" to describe a finished day.
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よくがんばりました！あなたの英語はわかりやすかったです。少しだけ文法を直して、より自然に聞こえるようにしました。これからも練習を続ければ、もっと上手になりますよ！
Great effort! Your writing was clear and easy to understand. I made a few small changes to improve grammar and make the sentences sound more natural in English. Keep practicing like this and your writing will get even better!
My a day
I came back at home after school.
I takeook a bath
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¶
It iwas very relaxing.
I played a game after dinner.
This is mywas a good a day.
My a day
I came back at home after school.
I takeook a bath
¶.¶
¶
It iwas very relaxing.
Your first sentence is in past tense, like you are writing about what already happened. So you should write about this like it already happened too.
I played a game after dinner.
This iwas my good a day.
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It sounds like a nice day! Keep practicing! It is tricky to know when you need to use an indefinite article (a, an) or a preposition (at) before nouns, and when you don't need one. You will master it!
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I came back at home after school. I came I came back I came back I came We say "came home" rather than "came back at home." The preposition "at" is incorrect in this context. "Come home" is the natural phrase. |
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I take a bath It is very relax. I t I t Your first sentence is in past tense, like you are writing about what already happened. So you should write about this like it already happened too. I t I t Since this happened in the past, we use the past tense "took" instead of the present tense "take." "Relax" is a verb, but here we need an adjective to describe the bath. So, "relaxing" is the correct form. We also use "was" to match past tense. |
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I played game after dinner. I played games after I played a game after I played a game after I played a game after "Game" is a countable noun, so we need an article: "a game." |
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This is my good a day.
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"This is my good a day" is incorrect in both word order and article use. The correct sentence is "It was a good day" to describe a finished day. |
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