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Feb. 3, 2025

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My first day of learning English

Hi, my name is Sergei I want to study English, My level is an A1 I need English for my future job and when travelling to foreign countries

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My 1st day of learning English

Hi, my name is Sergei. I want to study English,. My level is an A1and I need English for my future job and when travelling to foreign countries.

My 1First dDay lof Learning English

Hi, my name is Sergei i. I want to staudy english, my lvl A1 i. Currently, I have an A1 level. I need eEnglish for my future job and to trip for abroad in foreign countrilive abroad/to travel abroad.

Depending on whether you want to travel to other countries or live in another country, I gave you a choice.

My 1st day learning English

Hi, my name is Sergei i. I want to staudy eEnglish, my lvl A1 i. My level is A1. I need eEnglish for my future job, and to trip foravel abroad in foreign countri.

"travel abroad" usually means "travel in foreign countries." Having "in foreign countries" at the end of the sentence is unnecessary.

Hi, my name is Sergei i. I want to staudy eEnglish, my lvl A1 i. My level is A1 and I need eEnglish for my future job and to trip for abroad inwhen travelling to foreign countri.es

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My 1st day learning English

Hi, my name is Sergei iand I want to staudy eEnglish, my lvl A1 i. My level is A1 and I need eEnglish for my future job and to trip for abroad in foreign countririps abroad.

The clause "Trips abroad to foreign countries" is perfectly fine but slightly redundant since it's given when you say "trip abroad"

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Good writing! Good luck, remember to practice daily and track your progress. You will get there faster than you think.

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pluwbuw

Feb. 4, 2025

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Thank you very mutch, you are hundred percent right

My 1st day learning English


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My 1First dDay lof Learning English

My 1st day of learning English

Hi, my name is Sergei i want to stady english, my lvl A1 i need english for my future job and to trip for abroad in foreign countri.


Hi, my name is Sergei iand I want to staudy eEnglish, my lvl A1 i. My level is A1 and I need eEnglish for my future job and to trip for abroad in foreign countririps abroad.

The clause "Trips abroad to foreign countries" is perfectly fine but slightly redundant since it's given when you say "trip abroad"

Hi, my name is Sergei i. I want to staudy eEnglish, my lvl A1 i. My level is A1 and I need eEnglish for my future job and to trip for abroad inwhen travelling to foreign countri.es

Hi, my name is Sergei i. I want to staudy eEnglish, my lvl A1 i. My level is A1. I need eEnglish for my future job, and to trip foravel abroad in foreign countri.

"travel abroad" usually means "travel in foreign countries." Having "in foreign countries" at the end of the sentence is unnecessary.

Hi, my name is Sergei i. I want to staudy english, my lvl A1 i. Currently, I have an A1 level. I need eEnglish for my future job and to trip for abroad in foreign countrilive abroad/to travel abroad.

Depending on whether you want to travel to other countries or live in another country, I gave you a choice.

Hi, my name is Sergei I want to study English, I have my lvl A1 I need English for my future job and to travel for abroad


Hi, my name is Sergei I want to study English, My level is an A1 I need English for my future job and when traveling to foreign countries


Hi, my name is Sergei I want to study English, My level is an A1 I need English for my future job and to travel for abroad


Hi, my name is Sergei I want to study English, My level is an A1 I need English for my future job and when travelling to foreign countries


Hi, my name is Sergei. I want to study English,. My level is an A1and I need English for my future job and when travelling to foreign countries.

My first day of learning English


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